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| XxLilxDarlinGShortCakesXxX 2008-05-31 ch 1,  | abuseIt was cute but a lil OCC. I agree with "Imagination Queen" (sp?)Robin and Raven are the same height , its kind of weird to picture him carrying her like that; it better in bridal style.Keep it up , good work. |
| Imagination Queen 2008-05-24 ch 1, | abuseIf Cyborg ever found out Robin and Raven slept in the same room... oh man, dun know what would happen. Would have thought he would carry her with an arm around her back and the other under her knees, she isn't that much shorter than he is. It's just I'd think it would be difficult for him to carry her like that, Cyborg would have no problem. Here's my second little issue, she's too independant to let herself be carried unless she was injured, even then she wouldn't LIKE it... I would think if she didn't feel like walking she'd levitate. Either way it was cute and I dun want u to think this is a flame cause it was cute... just a little ooc |
| Michael 2008-05-17 ch 1, anon. | abuseVery good! Sorry my ignorance but what means "Land of Nod"? Anyway, I liked. |
| sinomin 2008-05-15 ch 1, | abuseAww, how cute. I really liked it. |
| DarkMickey 2008-05-14 ch 1, | abuseAww. such saccharine sweetness. =) |
| KAutumnLeavesH 2008-05-14 ch 1, | abuseOne word: Awh xD |
| liliac gurl 2008-05-14 ch 1, | abuseLOVED IT XD very cute :D |
| OMG? 2008-05-14 ch 1, anon. | abuseLIkE ROB/RAE IS AMAZING! AND THIS WAS jUST CRAP! LAND OF NOD?! PLEASE LEAVE FF!! |
| Shut up 2008-05-14 ch 1, anon. | abuseCrap, stop writing get off FF, write on DeviantArt. Get off FF!!GO!! GET OFF FF!! STOP RUINING THE /GOOD/ STORIES!! GET A LIFE! |
| Tokyo Blue 2008-05-14 ch 1, | abuseomg. SO cute. Love it so much |
| gothicgirl28 2008-05-14 ch 1, | abuseCute story! Espicially when the way that you put Raven yawning! |
| Rainbow Queen 2008-05-14 ch 1, | abusethe last bit was a bit..tipsy..but it was good. you forgot some puctuations.. Rain |