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roterhimmel
2009-02-20 . chapter 1
I don't understand why this has no comments. It's really pretty, and both sad and hopeful, somehow. Melancholic. I like Roxas' voice in here, and the repeated using of

'who can’t name exactly why he doesn’t feel right, why he’s lonely, and why he’s sad'

but most of all I loved this here,

'The person who lo-lo-loves the friend telling him not to go, the person walking by this building and wondering that if only something were different, he wouldn’t be like this'

Very lovely!
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