I like where you're going with this story mate. Very good and angsty! Please continue!

where is roxanne going

I love the story which I prefer Max/Roxanne in this one!

AWESOME STORY MAN I'M NEW TO THIS SITE AND THIS WAS ONE OF THE BEST STORIES I HAVE EVER READ IT WAS LIKE I WAS WATCHING DAYS OF OUR LIVES OR YOUNG AND THE RESTLESS LOL PLEASE UPDATE...

Please continue, please! I want to see roxanne and max kiss! Please!

this chapter made me really confused. it was sort of jumping from situation to situation and i found it hard to understand what was going on. its a really good story but would someone really turn murderous finding that two people used to go out with each other? i love the Mona character though, even if she is slightly far-fetched. you should maybe put lines in to show that you are talking about a different situation just to break it up a bit to make it easier to understand. but all in all really good plot :-)

i liked this i hope you have other great ideas

i love this story haha i was watching goofy movie today and realized i loved max and roxanne looked them up you have one of best stories ive read i really hope you continue it this is the first review ive ever written so i hope its not to bad but you wanted more reviews so i was happy to obblige!

Can't login must review. Awesome, just awesome. Please my mind will hurt without this having an end. I beg of you make a another chapter

First- i'd like to say, this story is AMAZING! I understand why you hate Mona. XD It's hilarious how stupid she is in this fic!

Second- I agree that this story deserves more reviews. BUT saying you aren't going to update until you get more reviews sounds, in my opinion, a little... rude... o.o

I mean i understand completely!; you're disappointed with the amount of reviews this has recieved(sp?) but saying you wont update until you get more will make people NOT want to review. Sounds weird, but it's true.

It'd be a shame if this story never finishes. / Cause i KNOW there are lots of people who love this fic. (including moi! XD)

-Roses Are Red. XOXO

Love this story!

I'll try to make this review short. But I make no promises. XD

Mona Is a B1TCH! I FREAKING HATE HER!(In this story)

I've always dis-liked Roxanne. (For one reason. coughMAXcough. XD) But i can actually tolerate her in this fic. I actually find myself feeling sorry for her. And rooting for her and stuff. I hope everything works out for her and Maxie. )

And Max! (*cartoon hearts in eyes* XD) heehee. 3 I love how he is in this story. I haven't seen either movies in, like, FOREVER. But i repeatedly watch/listen to "Stand out" From a Goofy Movie. heheh.

Update really soon!

Okay, I feel dumb for not reviewing the chapter...or the story all in all so far. So far, it's going great...very good in fact. I'm just wondering what will happen next...because I'm really interested in seeing what's next. Please update soon, if you can! ]

I feel like a total dummy.

No, really, I do. All this time I've been checking my inbox just to see if you've updated, getting sad when you didn't, and if you did just reading on and waiting again. Not once did I stop and think: I ought to review and give thanks that someone took the time to write this amazing story for such a little audience. I'm horrible! Don't worry, from now on, you can add one more review to expect. This I swear!

Your story is the only Max and Roxanne and Mona fix I ever get, you have this way of adding a little realism to this subject that I've never seen before, and I crave more of. I know Mona wasn't evil in her one appearance, she was just dull and boring (the only worthy thing about her was her teeth), but I suppose I can't help WANTING her to be, which is what your fic supplies. Please don't stop writing for this!

Yay! Max finally knows Mona's true nature! I hope things will work out with Max and Roxanne... Anyway, good chapter! Hope the next one comes soon! O3

Awesome chapter, I love this story. You write very well, please continue soon. See you/read you later.