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| fAteD lOvE 2008-08-13 ch 6, | abuseThat was so absolutely beautifully written, they were in character and even though it wasn't that dramatic, I could feel the emotional vibe :D So smooth and love the twist when she doesn't shoot him. I should stop talking before I start ranting, something that I'm wont to do. Keep it up, and I can't wait for your next update/sequel when you get back, (if you're not back yet). |
| Animiga 2008-07-02 ch 1, | abuseI really, really enjoyed this story. It was well written, well though out... and really really begging for a sequel! Looking forward to it! Stay safe. |
| Actias luna 2008-06-24 ch 6, anon. | abuseI like this. I can't help but feel a little sad for Casey and Sarah. And I am very curious about what Chuck will do next. Not to mention, how Ellie will react to Casey and Sarah passed out in her living room. I hope you are able to continue this soon. Thanks for writing and posting. |
| 007chuck 2008-06-03 ch 6, | abuseyou have done so well you rock on this i can not wait for part 2 |
| Lady of Pride 2008-05-20 ch 6, | abuseThis is a brilliant story-it's really quite wonderful. I have to thank you for coming up with it. Looking forward to Part Two. ;D |
| Canadian Chucky 2008-05-17 ch 6, | abuseBeth... :) Love it when authors can use a common theme. :) Makes it so much easier. |
| Airam4u 2008-05-17 ch 6, | abuseThat is what you call an unexpected turn of events. If I'm honest with myself you left the clues there, you just presented in such a way that made one 'forget' about it. Brilliantly done. BTW, this is one of the better pieces of fiction I have read recently. (Putting it on my Favorites :) Keep up the good work and stay safe. |
| RedNex 2008-05-17 ch 6, | abuseWhoa, AWESOME! You are really great at this, keep it up! |
| Deus Ex Sub Ubi 2008-05-17 ch 6, | abuseThis fic is building up to be a wild ride. I'm really looking forward to this man. Keep up the great work! |
| airam4u 2008-05-16 ch 5, anon. | abusethis is quite an interesting development. I have to say that I enjoy your writing style and plot development. Keep up the good work. |
| RedNex 2008-05-16 ch 5, | abuseohh! i really love this! great plot, wonderfully written, but you do realize you left it off at the worst... possible... time!? well, for us anyway! PLEEZE UPDATE!! |
| BillAtWork 2008-05-16 ch 5, | abuseI like the concept a lot. One of the central conflicts on the show is Sarah and Casey's sense of duty vs their growing affection for Chuck. I can see this same decision happening on the show soon. The dislog flowed well. Can't wait for more. |
| vandevere 2008-05-15 ch 1, | abuseThis is pretty interesting. I wonder what this Hidden File Command is ultimately going to do to Chuck, and-by extension-his friends... I do hope there's a Chapter 3 in there, along with a Chapter 4,5, ets... Vandevere |
| Deus Ex Sub Ubi 2008-05-14 ch 2, | abuseThere needs to be more Chuck fanfic. great job! more please! |
| gaaddict67 2008-05-14 ch 2, | abuseWow! That was so awesome! I definitely can't wait what other skills Chuck will acquire! |