|Reviews for Ranma Club|
| Dumbledork 2/15/09 . chapter 28
Nice one. And exactly what I'd expect a date with Musa to be like. But I think it's a canon fact that male Ranma can't sing at all, while female Ranma has a lovely singing voice.
| Erick Genryusai 2/14/09 . chapter 28
Love the part of Dance Dance Revolution arcade. And it fit with Musa perfect.
She and Ranma dance like Pros.
HAHAHAHA Nabiki sure cant give up on her money making plans does she.
Love the face she put when Musa told that they love Ranma so much they are willinly shared him. It was priceles. Nabiki will not blackmail Ranma with them, poor Nabiki...NOT.
And the part of...-"IF YOU WANT MONEY NABIKI, GET A JOB"-
- (horror BGM) - Those 3 words dont mix well to Nabiki. Its her worst fear. TO WORK.
Oh boy...so its gonna be like a Cooking Contest next Chapter, like Iron Chef...SUGOI.
And Shampoo and Ukyo are a team for that contest...hahaha, its not gonna be any contest to them. After all...they are one of the most skillful cooks in Nerima.
OH NO, OH NO...
- (scary voice) - Dont tell us that...AKANE IS PLANING TO ENTER THE IRON CHEF TO COOK?
RUN FOR YOUR LIFE, SAVE YOUR SELFS. AKANE'S GONNA COCK.
Will that Akane girl learn that she cannot cook even water, let alone a major even as Iron Chef!
Uh u...please man, have this mega idea for the contest.
For the Judges in Iron Chef...will be none other then...The JUDGES OF AMERICAN IDOL...Paula Abdul and SIMON.
Oh man...can you imagine them tasting and telling the competitors their opinion. Espcecially Simon. With lines like this...-"This soup taste, like if your Grandmother dirty socks landed on it,"- -"I much rather eat dog poop, then this. Terrible"-.
Heres an idea...
During the event, Nabiki and cohorts will try to sabotage Ukyo and Shampoo cook, by adding some disgusting ingredients, only to fail misserable, due to the Pixies.
So...only 3 more dates to go...you should let Bloom last. After all...as the old saying goes...The best for last.
And...its only a matter of time before they go back to Magix.
You definly must have a part where Flora meets Sasuke...heres a scene.
Its night, and Flora is coming from the store and heading home...when she pass Nerima Playground, she'll heard some sobbings, looking at the park she'll see Sasuke. When approach him, she'll see him sobbing and crying, and ask him why is he crying. Sasuke will tell her that Kuno and Kodachi scold him hard and tell him that he's worhtless and a lowly human being that no one will ever care for him and many awfull things. Flora, being a kind and warming girl like Kasumi, will tell him that its a lie, that he's not worthless, and give him some conficense. Sasuke will be happy that someone does care for him, and sees Flora as a Loving and Caring Angel, and thanks her so much.
Who knows...Sasuke will change little by little. Thanks to Flora.
And who knows...With Flora attitude and wise words... she could even talk and change...HAPPOSAI.
Yea...life for Ranma is changing in Nerima...he's doing many things that he could not done before, and loving it.
Not only Ranma change the Winx Girls life for the better...but also the Winx Girls change Ranma life for the better as well.
HERES ANOTHER IDEA FOR YOU...
Nabiki will try once again take pictures of Ranma and the WInx Girls, only with more cautious. When getting the pictures she will try to sell them before they know it...of course...they will know it and make another trick on her.
During the sell out of the Pictures...Digit will change the pictures the moment Nabiki handle to her customers. Nabiki;s thinking that she won...only to happen this.
The moment the boys open up and see the pictures...they will not see pictures of the Winx Gilrs, but...
COLOGNE NAKED WITH ONLY A THONG ON HER, IN A SEXY POSE.
The boys will yell in fright, while other vomit.
Nabiki will be facing one of her worst fears...
Her customers demmanding their MONEY BACK.
If Nabiki trys to weasel her way outta that by saying...-"No recept, no money back"- line, she'll lose her customers for ever. And if she tries to shift the blame of Ranma or someone else, they'll nail her. Either way, she'll be in a fried pickle.
Like that idea.
So far...this is one of the shuien Ficts in this part. Keep it up man.
| chm01 2/14/09 . chapter 28
a great chapter, and Musa playuing DDR was a great idea (though I wanted to see beethoven's fifth simphony)any ways iwas wondering if you could make an opening for a chapter using Bleach's new opening (if not please use the new song (it's called velonica)) I just love that opening (though why i don't know)
| The Lord Of Pages 2/14/09 . chapter 28
..Hehe.. I just went down here without reading your chapter... Sorry, alright... What was I gonna ask you? Hnmm... OH! When will you..Damn forgot again..Oh! When will you do the next RaiVs 4shit rant? And excuse my crass language, but really, thats all they are. Shitty Fu(bleep)tards... And now to read the chapter! Okay, next question... And it's been bugging me for a while, where the heck do you get all these songs and their translations? And that begs another question, how many Anime series have you even seen? I'm interested, cos I wanna see some of these.
Oh! And have you ever given thought to making a darkish intro? Like say for a part where it moves to a darker/dramatic tone for the chapter. For example... A mock-death of Ranma? Hey theres an idea, say Voltar gets a sneak attack on him, and nearly kills him off. While Ranma's in the Magical ER the Winx and his mom have to figure out what did it to him, maybe Voltar got him with a curse of some kind? And thats slowly killing him, so the girls have to find a cure and quick, or Ranma gets offed for good.
And this could be a chance for the girls to have a moment where they're the center of the fic. And while we're on the topic, ever see NGE, Hellsing or Death-note? Those three might have some good dark intro music, me? I'd go for Whats up people? Or The world. See ya! And please forgive the massive review...( Sweat drops.) I guess I'm just in a chatty mood right now.
| 7 Winds 2/2/09 . chapter 27
I do believe that nabiki got her just want she deserved for all the trouble she has cauased everyone including ranma and the girls. hope hope the change is for the better. update soon.
7 Winds ;)
| Saotome-san 1/31/09 . chapter 1
Great chapter on 27. Ryoga really got what he deserved for behaving dishonourably. keep up the good work. Cant wait for the next chapter to come. On a sidenote don't 4Kids deserve at leat some credit for bringing us The Winx club in the first place?, at least untill the alternate dub came out,
| OBSERVER01 1/31/09 . chapter 27
finally!ryoga gets his just dessert. the beating of a why do i have the feeling that he'll be valtors newest flunky?keep it up
| bloomforever 1/30/09 . chapter 27
well i forgivew you, but does it really have to be in twenty chapters? anway very good chapter cant wait untill the next update.
| cabrera1234 1/30/09 . chapter 27
thanks for the update
| PEJP Bengtzone 1/30/09 . chapter 27
Great work, I hope it will get better.
Sad that you can't feature more temporarily crossovers, like letting the Sailor Senshi, or the "Tenchi Muyo" gang appear for a few chapters, helping Ranma & Winx Club out to end those stupid actings of Soun and Genma, once and for all.
It's also sad that you might not be interested in anime/manga like "Negima", "Happiness!" or "Girls Bravo." The last one could be useful to put Yukinari and Miharu together, period, while beating up all the bad females in the town, before Yukinari leaves to live on the hidden moon of Terra, called Seiren, with Miharu.
The two first ones could work great for Ranma and the Winx Club to learn Terran magic, while visiting Mahora Academy, there they could learn magic from Negi Springfield, unless they visit Merdiana Magic Academy in Wales, which might be doubtfully considered, or Mizuhosaka Academy, there Ranma and the Winx Club could temporarily joining the Magic Section, while befriending the "Happiness!" characters.
If you don't know so much about "Happiness!", and "Girls Bravo", you can check them out at !
Anyway, I just hope your story gets updated sooner, or later!
After all, it's all up to you, since it's your story!
| Jerry Unipeg 1/30/09 . chapter 27
GREAT CHAPTER! (*x4) About time Ryoga get it by Akane.
| Dumbledork 1/30/09 . chapter 27
What you did to Ryoga was mean... I LOVE IT! HAHAHAHAHA!
| chm01 1/30/09 . chapter 27
I always wondered if Ryoga was going to pay for using dead-intended techniques on areas that had posible casualities
| Dark-Magician-41 1/30/09 . chapter 27
I liked the explination man. Once again I loved the story. Though that brutal beat down of Ryoga by Ranma then Akane (Winches) that was a bit to brutal if you ask me but hey the pig got whta he want. I hope you update soon I love your stories.
| The Lord Of Pages 1/30/09 . chapter 27
YAY! Update! And more Akane-bashing for later! Okay, so, when will Valtor and the Trix show up again? And who's the next lucky gal for a date?