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| Amaxing 2008-05-27 ch 3,  | abuseMhm. It never ceases to amaze me how a few simple words can capture an entire moment. Also, I can see the characters actually reacting like that. My only gripe is: write longer ones! Or maybe like a mini-series? I dunno... something. -Max |
| Youkaineko 2008-05-27 ch 3, | abuseThese are so good. I love UsoNam. GREATEST PAIRING EVA~! I'm so glad that you continued these from chapter 1. I wouldn't mind if you added more~~ Great Job!^^ |
| SpanishPirate 2008-05-26 ch 3, | abuseyay! u continued awesome! cute as always! =] |
| Kairouseki 2008-05-26 ch 3, | abuseWeirdest Nami pairing ever, for me, but I'm oddly fascinated anyway. |
| The Sacred and Profane 2008-05-25 ch 3, | abuseAmazing job on this chapter! Keep up the excellent work and write more, you're very talented at portraying this couple. |
| Amaxing 2008-05-24 ch 2, | abuseOh! Oh! Please write more! I like this pairing! ... Don't worry... there's more to it then that... Overall, I like the format that the story takes, it's short, and easy to read, and its pretty good at illustrating different... defining moments of the relationship. The one thing I'd say detracts from it is the fact that it IS so short... I felt that some of the moments didn't seem to get as much time as they deserved. But that could just be me. Stay amaxing. -Max |
| SpanishPirate 2008-05-22 ch 2, | abuseaw this is soo adorable! not a big fan of usoppxnami but i gave it a try reading this and it was great! i hope u continue this! |
| The Sacred and Profane 2008-05-16 ch 2, | abuseAnother amazing chapter! Keep updating this and if you're taking requests, how about one where Nami realizes she loves Usopp and another where Usopp comforts Nami about his feelings for her and how he loves her more than Kaya. |
| Saiyan Angie 2008-05-14 ch 1, | abuse*laughs her head off* This isn't the most aesthetically pleasing couple, but it's rather realistic in it's unpredictability. |
| The Sacred and Profane 2008-05-14 ch 1, | abuseContinue these! Great job and I hope you update soon! |