loved it.

Ow I just love how ya get the relationship working between the two.
All 'GR' at each other and then they jump each other in the middle of their fights. Nice, nice.

O_O I like this. >< Mind, so far I like all your stories in general, but still. Especially for a one-shot; the plot and fanservice balanced out perfectly. >w

aww that was a good fic i just wish it had been a little longer. keep up the good work though

This was really fun to read! Loved the situation (and I think the location was pretty clear: I liked the detail of Bakura telling Malik he was the one who broke his control over Keith), and their interaction, with the two of them started off very seriously fighting (I only have issues with characters using the word "feisty" in romance, so this threw me off for a moment, but well, could just be me). Malik using the blade in the rod makes me ridiculously happy, and Bakura ending up winning, and the ending! :)
I also liked this "He also revealed that Malik had been right about Bakura having a very well-muscled chest", what with the exact parallelism, with "revealed" reused: dramatic revelation... and also, Bakura -is- hot. *g*

OMGod!! that was great! YEA! No wonder it took so very very long.. ROFL

It was awesome!! TYTYTYTY who ho

feel free to throw confetti, I'll even vacuum. lol. Oh yes, he must come back to reclaim the rod. LOL yea sure Baku..

Good story! ^~^