hey cool story. is ginyu in goku's body? i hope not, i like the fics where goku's viciousd and blood thirsty, something out of the ordinary. cant wait fro the next chapter. just a tip, u need more detail

Wow! well written and original! More please!

WOAH! This is gonna be a bumpy, kewl ride. I'm gonna hand on tight. So write!

a great angle I'd never considered...lokking forward to more!

ohhh how interesting... keep it up...

VEEEEERRRRY interesting. So...ya going to finish? I hope so! I wanna see what happens!

It's pretty good, please continue this

An awesome story beginning. I am at the very edge of my seat in annticipation. However, I do hope that this doesn't mean that you have given up on "The Kill"...

AHHHHH! Cliffhanger! NOOOOOO! Oh please write the next part soon!

Oh my gosh! This is one of the most original works I've read all year. I am VERY much looking forward to more of this, you always write so discriptivly and I never know quite what to expect when I read one of your stories. This is a completely new take on what could have happened on Namek. Thank you for making my day!

Juu

Wow really neat story can't wait to read the next chapter!