Cute little story with good writing. Thumbs up.

Keep writing, you're really good at it.

great story, loved the view of the others in torchwood especially john, loved it

really cute and sad, love it, great writing, you really capture the characters

loved it, sad but in a good way

Oh wow! Love 'em all, but particularly like John Hart, because I didn't like him much on air or in other people's stories, but I liked him here, you captured him so well.

Also, Martha, cuz of the way she goes 'Ianto was definitely stuck on Jack'. Brilliant line, lovely piece!

oh my god that was really good.

i love it :)

Wow! absolutely great! Will definetly be watching out for more work by you! Thought it was really great and I loved the Everyone Else chapter - thought it captured everyones thoughts really well.

Hollie : )

I really loved this. It captured exactly how I think Ianto and Jack feel about each other and I loved Tosh's views on their relationship. Great fic, I can't wait to see what you do next.

Too hard to read. Sorry

Oh, more, please... :) I love this, you capture Jack so well, too. Fabulous, can't wait for chapter three!

oh my god that was so cute. i love it :)

so very very easy...How do you not love someone? well written

That's very good, you seem to understand the characters really well. Can you write one for Jack please?

This is your first fic? You're a natural writer, then, I'd love to read more from you!

As the fic goes, I like the picture you paint of Ianto, it's very in character, he's always ever so slightly oblivious to things and emotions that are obvious to everyone else.

Like the little comments about how he sees the relationship, and the one about the quaint cottage... Please write more?

Very impressive for a first story. Short and sweet. Loved it. Thanks for sharing. Enjoyed it! :)