nice story

I agree that it is a more realistic portrayal of Snape, and one I can appreciate greatly.

Harry, on the other hand, annoys me more than in the books. Or maybe I haven't touched them for too long. Half the time, I'm begging for someone to smack him, Crucio him, or get him OUT of his obssession with Sirius and the idiotic idea he can actually do anything, realistically speaking.

I can understand his great emotional trauma...but he's annoying. Gah.

Well written,

-Cymru

Very interesting premise! I like your version of Snape, I haven't really found any fanfic that portrays him this dark--and it works perfectly. He's a bastard--but still someone I'm rooting for, haha!

And it's good to read a story where Harry has a distinctive power but is not Super!Harry.

The interactions between Severus and Sirius are very well developed and written--it's interesting to see Sirius being the one offering the olive branch.'

Great story!

Oh that was deliciously twisted. I loved it as always! Your Severus was so well done and I am so glad that Sirius made it too. You blew me away when it was Sev that was supposed to be dead, I had a suspsion because of the fact that everyone else was in Sirius' stream. Thanks for sharing, would love to see the sequel. Gonna check your stories for it.

Oh yes, sequel please! I love all your stories that I've read so far.

Excellent!

lovely story, absolutely perfect ending <3 Thank you for writing!

Totally freaking awesome. You nearly made me cry towards the end there, my eyes were all misted up and everything. Awesome story.

I absolutely loved this story. I also admire the wellness in which it was written. Therefore, I beg you to write a sequel!! Please!! ;)

This is one of the best stories I've come across in quite a long time. The quality of writing and characterisation was excellent :D You have to let me know if you get round to making a sequel - which I desperately hope you do. I'd love to read more, and find out what happens to Voldemort!

nice chapter! cant wait 2 c wat snape means! u r a good writer! n since u r such a good writer i gotsta go read the next chapter! lolz

-HPANAI

he Boy Who Controls Fate...well that Harry for you, nice fic! hope there will be a sequel!

I found this an irritating, yet highly compelling story. It had me hooked until the end. Irritating because the characterizations of Sirius and Snape aren't what I'm used to, but they were written very well, and believably so.

Ah ha!

The bomb blew Sirius up?? No. Sorry, it couldn't have. If Dodgy was the bomb or had it inside of him and there was big enough pieces of Dodgy left to be identifiable like his head then the bomb/spell wasn't powerful enough to blast Sirius into little bits like you are implying. Sorry.