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GG 2008-07-07 ch 21, anon.	abuseI loved your story. Please keep writing stories you are really good. I love music as well I have even written music of my own but I have never shared my music with anyone. Accept for one song in the fourth grade nearly nine years ago and my cousins don't let me forget it. Augustana, and Coldplay has great music I have never heard of Aqualung but I'm sure they are good. You should check out the music video The Long Road To Ruin by Foo Fighters it's a parody of soap operas its really funny. Sara Bareilles has great music such as her new song Bottle it up. P.S. Radiohead sucks.
White-Star-Friend 2008-07-03 ch 21,	abuseBrilliant. So does that mean there's a sequel? Oh! Well done on an excellent story! I loved every chapter :D Loved it! You write wonderfully!
Exintaris 2008-07-02 ch 21,	abuseYes - much more satisfying. Actually, I can't see an asterisk in the last chapter, but I can guess where it is. Undoubtedly, by the way; it's doubtful, but there's no word undoubtful.
leane 2008-07-02 ch 21, anon.	abuseclaps i could not ask for a better end for this! i could not wait for your next story.
White-Star-Friend 2008-07-02 ch 20,	abuseNice. Short but sweet. How sweet was it when Joey kissed her! Finally! lol. Update soon. and yeah, i recognised a few of the songs.
Exintaris 2008-07-01 ch 20,	abuseIt depends on what you define as suffering ... A lot of suffering doesn't teach anyone anything except how awful other human beings can be, and you don't need personal experience to discover that; all you need to do is read. Other than that - is this the end? It works as one, though perhaps a fast turn-around emotionally by Rachel Green.
Exintaris 2008-06-30 ch 19,	abuseYes, I remember now, you did tell us about the adoption. Nice little development on the shooting.
White-Star-Friend 2008-06-30 ch 19,	abuseNice chapter. It made me go 'oh' when I realsied Joey shoved the gun away lol. Btw I love the names of your chapters lol. Update soon please :D:D
leane 2008-06-30 ch 18, anon.	abusei know this was a dark story but for some reason, the cliffhanger made me laugh. i know that wasn't your intention at all and i'm sorry if my reaction offended you, i honestly didn't mean to. i'm just here to let you know what a good story this is and many people have grown attached to it (me, included). great job! i can't wait for the next update :)
Exintaris 2008-06-29 ch 18,	abuseFair enough (about Monica). I have got lost in the relationships - this John was a step-uncle, married Judy Geller after Jack died? Anyway, a nice piece, though maybe Joey should have said he never loved Alexandra, and nice cliffhanger - what next? Thanks for putting me on your favorite list, by the way.
White-Star-Friend 2008-06-28 ch 18,	abuseHUH?!! How can someone have a gun pointed at their head and get a pain in their shoulder?!! You're killing me here. To end there of all chapters! Brilliant stuff! But don't kill the main characters! It's bad enough you killed Monica! Ahh! Quick! Update!
White-Star-Friend 2008-06-27 ch 17,	abuseOh wow. Full chapter! I can't believe you're gonna kill Monica though! Don't do it! Update verryy soon please!
Exintaris 2008-06-27 ch 17, anon.	abuseOh man - talk about dramatic! But where are the police in all this? Did you have to kill Monica?
Exintaris 2008-06-25 ch 16,	abuseIt's easier to find flaws in someone else's plot than in your own - believe me, I know (I've had my share of criticism). I accept the point of the first bit. It's not what is actually the case, but what Rachel believes to be. (For instance, no court in the land would require her to stay married to a man who beat her - and beatings would leave visible scars to prove the truth of her accusations - but she might not be able to believe that, after years of manipulation by this uncle). Fiancée, please! Why does nobody seem to know this now? It's a fiancé if male, a fiancée if female. French, you know: the French are always careful to distinguish genders.
RossnRachel4everr 2008-06-25 ch 16,	abuseupdate soon! I can't wait to see Rachel at the wedding. very well written.

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