I really enjoyed reading this! I'm sad you aren't going to write anymore. All the best.

I have truly enjoyed reading your story. As sad as I am that you will not be finishing it, I am very grateful that you at least had the courtesy to inform your readers that you wouldn't be finishing it. Hope to see more of your work someday and who knows I may finish it myself. :)

I'd originally avoided this story due to the "permanent hiatus" notice, but, now, I'm glad I decided to give it a shot and click the link... I won't fluff it up and say that it's "like, the best story evaz!" but it did catch my interest and I enjoyed reading it. If I had the confidence that I could follow your storyline effectively, I would adopt it in a heartbeat, but in this case I think it's best to let sleeping dogs lie... thank you for writing.

o...why did they tense when ryan said that! I cant wait to see where this story goes! update soon please!

Mae

I really hope you come back to this story too...its really good and I can't wait to read more of it!

Ooh the wait was fine. I loved it, it was sad at first with Dani telling Eric she was going to die. But it was kind of nice at the same time. :) It was great, can't wait for more.

I'm sorry, but I kinda was distracted after the wife beater thing... God, that should look HOT.

Anyways, glad you updated :)

aw adorable! you made me cry! well done!

That was some talk Dani and Eric just had. So sad.

Eric and Ryan are sweet. They make a nice couple.

It was a good chapter. Don't rush yourself.

I do have a couple of things. First off, if you're going to have someone do a speech and you're splitting it up into paragraphs, go ahead and use both sets of quotation marks. It's easier on the reader and only takes a few seconds to type into place. It also gives things a cleaner look instead of making it look like you hit the enter key and just didn't feel like going back up to fix things.

Secondly, you said it was a Red Sox game, which is baseball, but then a couple of paragraphs later, you have them watching a basketball game. Might want to choose one.

Hey, you updated. That's really all that matters. I"m happy you updated too. :)

Awesome CSI: Miami story, can't wait to read more and see how it all plays out. Please update it soon _

Tala-Paige

loved it. :3

a! FINALY! thanx 4 the awsome update!

Love it!