Amazing! I think it was a very believable characterization of both Lust and Scar, not to mention an interesting and insightful look at the pairing. I also really love your use of the second person. This is a great look at a character who is usually either portrayed in a heartless way or an overly melodramatic, out of character way, and you found a lovely middle ground.

I really enjoyed that! You did a fantastic job getting into Lust's head. I'm not normally a fan of stories in the second person, but this was one of the rare few that worked extremely well in that point of view.

Loved it! :D

Interesting.

The POV is different, and the pairing is odd but interesting. I like it rather a lot, as it is different from the usual overdone pairings you often see.

I like it rather a great deal, infact. Nice work.

Wow... that is wonderful. Seriously, I can feel the emotions in this fanfic. You did a great job and I'm glad I get to read it! I like everything about it. Faves!