My brain just exploded at the Armstrong intro paragraph XD "I was certain that darling young Edalene Elric had hidden in here. She was just so enthusiastic about the dress I made her that she ran out in glee. I suppose it is the Elric way to express joy in kinetic displays." yeahh, Armstrong hasn't changed at all XDD

I like Riza's new name x)

I don't mind the implied RoyxEd even though I don't really like the pairing, but that's not because it's two girls together or anything in fact I'm actually working on a genderbent-into-yuri fic myself :)

OH ROYAL YOU FEMME FATALE. 3

Freak bastards thinking they can do whatever they want with her, probably because she's female...Royal's a very powerful alchemist so shove that, creepy dudes :D

Hehe, the end was sweet with the catty-only-on-the-surface military BFF-age. x)

"Unfortunate the fourteen year old sister she had looked more like she was in her mid twenties and from a different country with her southern belle dress and bonnet." LMAO! That sounds cute though, I am loving sweet little Alary x)

"Hugiherahta" I googled that. It means intelligent...did you do that on purpose?

"Colonel Bitch" seems like she'd fill out those shoes niiicely :)

'Falman spoke next. "She's right. It isn't the uniform but the large amount of fat you have around your mid section. If you had followed the diet I had regimented then this wouldn't be a problem."'

Oh no you didn't! XD

LOl poor guy!Riza, he must feel so...out of place there, having to hear about PMS and thongs and stuff. He seems like a cool guy 8)

Har har! I will keep watching you! Love it so far!

... wow. I think that this is the first time that I am almost overly enthusiastic about a yuri pairing.

But... *squeal!* Femme!Roy/ Femme!Ed is really hot!

It took me long to get here, but here I am.

I was missing your change of canon pairings... Jeana is good, and Ed hasn't gotten into anything... yet. Bye

Umm...are those two being paired up?

Other than that concern, nice chapter. Glad to see an update!

I just had to go back and reread the last chapter to remind myself of what was going on, and I like your triangles! Very interesting...

Any chance of quicker updates next time? *puppydogeyes*

lol oh you are evil...

Making those terrible triangles. You should be ashamed.

jk jk

Have you decided if this is going to be yuri or are you just messing with me?

Loved this but now I have to go back and read the previous chapter. That chapter is my favorite so far.

Well anyways love this story and please update soon!

Ed keeping things in her bra sounds so... strange. _"

(there's some interesting fics around when you use the right search words... I should look around more often...)

Erm...

WOW!

Go yuri!

Uh... Yeah, just to let you know...

5 months?

:I seem to be an avid nagger for updates:

I suppose I ought to do this correctly:

Fuck yes, show me the girl on girl action!- because I love Ed's rosy blush!

pfft. Actually, I really do like this fic, very silly _* and RoyEd is great yaoi or yuri style D

Any chance Hughes will make an entrance? D

lulz, u said Edward about twice near the end instead of whatever female name 'he' had O.o

Armstong's description was one of the most hilarious I've ever heard of him/her.

Yuri? uhm... I think I'll go for the 'do what you want' as this is a 'General' genre fic. Naïve Ed is good to read sometimes. Bye.