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| FrostDeman 2008-06-18 ch 4,  | abusemeh it's ok i guess...it coul use some work... |
| RandomRooster 2008-05-20 ch 4, | abuseTist good, i'm liking your concept of one person against them all, untill he/she/whatever, finds someone to open up to. I also like your introduction to each chapter for the main character, thats a clever touch, it brings you back to how the main character feels after each event. Good luck with the rest of the story, wondering what spieces the main character will be. Maybe something out of an ancient race? Or from outer space? Hey! that rhymed! Fluffy Bottoms the Third, HEHE! Funny name, I LIKE IT! Anyway. Keep at it, RandomRooster. |
| pikachuhunter1 2008-05-19 ch 4, | abuseGreat chapter. It's odd that the main character thing (do I have to keep calling it thing or will you give me a name?) doesn't know who Mew was. I was a little confused about the light and the glass thing on the side of the building. Great job, and update soon! Pika!! |
| V2mew 2008-05-19 ch 4, | abuseI wonder what will happen next? Now that Doorballsign or whatever know the truth about Mew how will Mew react. Anyway, this story is awesome. Please write a new chapter. I am looking forward to it. |
| pikachuhunter1 2008-05-18 ch 3, | abuseGreat chapter! I hope the Pokemon-thing is okay, whatever it is. Nothing stands a chance against a Mew! Nothing more than a few typos here. I can't wait to see what happens next. You really know how to make a great plot. Update soon! Pika! |
| Alisonven 2008-05-18 ch 3, | abuseOh dear, poor Mr Fluffy Bottom! Mew will end up killing him/her/it. Cute story. Is the narrator a shape-changing Mewtwo, by any chance? It seems to have that particular pokemon's Big Chip on the Shoulder about being an outcast! Anyway, I'll keep an eye on this story - I've added it to my story alert list. AlisonVen |
| pikachuhunter1 2008-05-16 ch 2, | abuseAnother really good chapter! It's so sad. T.T Poor nameless Pikachu thing. I hope it feels better (and that it doesn't get hurt in that battle they're going to do. I can't wait for the next chapter. Update soon! Pika!! |
| pikachuhunter1 2008-05-15 ch 1, | abuseThis is a great story! I can't wait for more. I wonder what the main character is...a Mewtwo? No, Mewtwo can't shift. Oh well, I suppose I'll have to find out when you reveal it to us. Update soon! This is going to be really good! Pika!! |