Great job. You actually know how to make Rachel and Marco sound believable :-)

ooh, that was nice. Very nice. Restrained and yet emotive. Despite being a non-canon pairing it was surprisingly in character. Thank you for sharing it!

is this about marco and rachel? soo col! even if i'm wrong, this poem rocks!

that was a wonderful poem.

aw! omg! that is so sad... i always knew there was something between them, the way they always fought in the books! good job!
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Wow. I don't think I've ever liked a Marco-Rachel piece. This much.
It was great how this is a side to Marco people rarely think of, and yet you kept him IC the whole way. *applauds*
So, almost done reading the chapters...heh...sorry, something was wrong with the computer...:(

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