Hey there Lau! It's been awhile!

Anyways...To tell you the truth, I too, have always wondered about what would be going on with those two in the world of nothingness.
I like the idea that you protrayed. LOL at the fact at L stealing stuff. Espeically his supply of glucose.XD

Wow... interesting depiction of the afterlife. XD Nice job. L

0o0o i like this story. it's funny and entertaining.

I think this should be more than a one-shot. =0 ok, maybe I'm not so good at persuading people to write. XD

I'm new to Death Note but already know the ending of the anime reading the fics in this Fandom! :D

Nice job and I liked your use of different perspectives for characters. L and his slight of hand thievery is awesome and I liked the fact you had them playing cards and games from the item L stole from the living world.

I was wondering if you'd consider putting different character's dialogue on different lines instead of bunching them together? It makes reading easier and helps differentiate between character speeches. Like in your fourth paragragh where L and Light have their dialogue bunched in the one paragraph, separating the dialogue could help here.

Anyway, that's just me and I haven't even posted in this Fandom yet so feel free to tell me to sod off! :D

Liked this a lot. Great job.


Mikado

that was just so lol, my friend. You've saved me from science class boredom

Actually, it's L Lawliet. Not Lee, just simply L. Anyway, I like this. ^^ For some reason, L is able to steal stuff from the world of the living... Smart ol' L.

Haha, this was a welcome break from cramming :P It was cute and funny, I like it. You should write a sequel, or transform it into a full-blown story.