Reviews for No More Mr Nice Sena

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Dark's Mistress 2008-08-28 ch 1,	abuseHeh heh. Sena with a tattoo. SOunds interesting. Hope you continue! YA-HA! ... XD I feel like such a dork!
RaitenKitsune 2008-08-05 ch 1,	abusecoolie, sounds like its going to be awesome^^update ASAP
72669 2008-07-30 ch 1,	abusenods approvingly I really don't like Yaoi, but this sounds exciting! O... Lucky review, number 21!
Green.on.Black 2008-07-13 ch 1,	abuseWell, I am quite intrigued as to where this would go. Keep it up.
HiurSena fan 2.0 2008-07-13 ch 1, anon.	abuseI'm looking forwerd to reading more so please find the time to update.
silver_wolf 2008-06-30 ch 1, anon.	abusei hope the next chapter is posted soon
mizu no fukushuu 2008-06-23 ch 1,	abuseInteresting premise, one of which is nice and fresh. I hope you update soon. I've got an issue, though. If you are going to write a comment about something, could you please put it before or after the chapter. Putting it right in the story drives me crazy. It's like having a pop-up appear right in the middle of a playing you're game and because of it, you die. ... Okay, I'm exaggerating, but you get my point. It's not like the information isn't important or interesting, but it's a bit annoying. Also, the same thing goes for numbers in the story to connect the word or words to the info about it at the end or beginning of the story. ...I'm picky. So shoot me... (\_/) Mizu.
anime-lover93 2008-06-22 ch 1,	abusealthough it has a very slow like start it could be really intresting if u worked on it and kept going with it. I really hope that you do continue this story for I wannt to see whats going to happen next! Please and thx you. AL93 (my abriv.)
flit 2008-06-18 ch 1, anon.	abusesweetie, you do know that kendo is Japanese for "way of the sword," right? So, that kind of counts as sword lessons.
The8thSin 2008-06-18 ch 1,	abuseof course it's while i'm going through my fav lists that i check your's and find Eyeshield. either a strange coincidence or irony being a ** since i was thinking "none of these guys are gonna be into Eyeshield...". so here we are :P this sounds great, from the bit you have up. and it's hirusena, so that just makes everything fun~. thank you for starting this, es21 doesn't get enough love, so i'll be keeping my eye out for more :)
sakura's conscience 2008-06-12 ch 1,	abusewoah. an average genius's IQ is only around 140-190 right??
Silly 2008-06-04 ch 1, anon.	abuseI like where this story is going already. Update soon please? And btw, not to sound rude but you'll probably get more reviews if you extend your chapters :]
puretsubasa 2008-05-28 ch 1,	abuseSounds interesting! This is the first story that I've seen that has such a character for Sena. I'm really looking forward to it! Good luck! And please don't give up on this story! I love the first chapter. However, just a suggestion, you should make your chapters longer. Otherwise, you'll end up with a bigillion chapters. By the way, wouldn't Sena be too young to get a tattoo? When you say most respected job, do you mean that in like a 'most feared' way or a 'that is where I want to work when I grow up' type of way? Gambatte ne!
Saskie 2008-05-22 ch 1,	abuseUPDATE PLEASE~!
JustAReader 2008-05-22 ch 1, anon.	abusethis story has potentials... hope it develop in to something good... btw, 378!? the human with the highest IQ is Marilyn vos Savant with an IQ of 228, as a child. IQ differs when you're an adult and when you're a child. so yeah... do some reserch before/during your writting. it would help to make the story seem more realistic. =] -JustAReader

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