 flamingmarsh 2009-11-21 . chapter 14good chapter |
 RogueRaven21 2009-08-06 . chapter 13Logic computer crash FTW! And Sides 'reboot' perfectly a Sides thing to do! |
 flamingmarsh 2009-08-05 . chapter 13wow, Prowl seems a little too harsh in this you know?
this was good though |
 Paleodex 2009-08-05 . chapter 13I need to drop another review. I already left one on lj. It's just too funny.
I especially loved Prowl's little bit of dialogue, "...The last time you had a brilliant thought, it did not remain merely a thought for long. You defy logic in nearly all things, why not this as well?..." It was fantastic. Lovely. And fragging hilarious.
Also adored Sideswipe smacking Prowl to reset his CPU after it locked up. And the fact that it locked up in the first place. 'twas super funny.
Sideswipe is cute. Sideswipe is funny. I love Sideswipe. |
 Tiamat1972 2009-08-04 . chapter 13Ha ha! It popped into my in box before morning! I really like the tweaking you did. Wonder what Sideswipe did. XD |
 cmdrtekk 2009-03-29 . chapter 12liked this one. Yup, yup, yup. :) |
 shimmershadow30 2009-03-29 . chapter 12AWW I LUV DA TWINZ!! |
 RogueRaven21 2009-03-29 . chapter 12SQUE! This is awesome master Okami! ^_^ (I miss my emoticons) Loves Loves Loves! |
 flamingmarsh 2009-03-29 . chapter 12really cute |
 Jessie07 2009-02-19 . chapter 11Awesome story! That was really nice of Optimus...not that he's not normally nice to the autobots...what ever you know what I'm talking about. This is a really great story and I can't wait to read the next chapter so please update soon!! |
 shimmershadow30 2009-02-18 . chapter 11aw Optimus is so nice he let Sides go see Sunny thanx Optimus!! !! i luved it it showed he cares a lot :) |
 Bluebird Soaring 2009-02-18 . chapter 11Perfect balance of Prime and Siders...both with what feels like the weight of the world on their shoulders, and helping each other throug =) Beautiful answer to this prompt!! |
 Silveriss 2009-02-18 . chapter 11It's been a while since I've reviewed one of your stories on here but I have to say that I really liked this one. The lead-in and flow was perfect. It was a completely believable story with just the right touch of description and dialogue, not to mention the wonderful interaction between Prime and Sideswipe.
I noticed no glaring spelling or grammar errors. ^^ |
 Tiamat1972 2009-02-18 . chapter 11Love Optimus in this one. He's very sweet. XD Ratchet is going to blow a fuse. |
 flamingmarsh 2009-02-18 . chapter 11this was a really good chapter.
Haze shouldn't be so mean |