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Anzer'ke
2009-10-21 . chapter 1
Indeed what you say is true, I say that they missed a great chance with not having the two of them meet in the show.

Not to mention, can you imagine the fight scene, awesome.

And this was rather brilliant.

Peace out and Rock on,

Anzer'ke.
Qzil
2009-03-25 . chapter 1
8D

I can't think of anything else to say except this made me happy.
eechan
2008-07-25 . chapter 1
*LOL* XD Ha ha! Now I'm officially in love with the idea of this pairing, which I had incidentally never even CONSIDERED before today. You rock!
HeartofFire-SoulofWater
2008-07-17 . chapter 1
hahahaha... nice...
zutara4lyfe
2008-06-15 . chapter 1
Lmao, 'Could use a bit more volume, though'! Loved it and love the pairing!

=) Zutara4Lyfe
zutarakid50
2008-06-14 . chapter 1
Lol. That's really funny!
Recalled to Life
2008-06-01 . chapter 1
lol, I love JetMai... I'm not sure why, but they seem to make the perfect couple... That was just amazing...
Wohitzi
2008-05-25 . chapter 1
xD Hehe. I think you've just officially made me a Jet/Mai fan with this fic. Cute and funny.
xlovelylightx
2008-05-19 . chapter 1
I read it on LJ... And I still love it!
sara
2008-05-15 . chapter 1
lol that was funny
C.A.M.E.O.1 and Only
2008-05-15 . chapter 1
Hm...I AGREE WITH UR POINT!! LOL!
kasplosion
2008-05-15 . chapter 1
Hahahahaha! Too funneh. I like the idea of Jet/Mai. Yays to you! (:
Inkbl0t
2008-05-15 . chapter 1
...*wipes away a tear* Oh snaps, that was day-umm funneh. Jet/Mai hadn't even occurred to me, but you totally made it-them-work. Props!
Archer
2008-05-15 . chapter 1
Though I am a hardcore cannon shipper, Im also a big time fan of humor. I give this a 8/10 because Mai didnt make some kind of dry but still funny joke about it.

Funny:
She stared at him, her face blank and completely emotionless, epitomizing seriousness. “Sorry, I don’t scream.”

Suddenly, a hand sneaked away and landed firmly on her backside, giving it a small squeeze.

She yelped in surprise.

Jet grinned. “Not bad. Could use a bit more volume, though.”

Funnyer:
She stared at him, her face blank and completely emotionless, epitomizing seriousness. “Sorry, I don’t scream.”

Suddenly, a hand sneaked away and landed firmly on her backside, giving it a small squeeze.

Mai smirked. Thats the best you can do?

/change location/Western Air temple
The Gaang was playing a game of cards.
Sokka:Toph you have any..
AH
Aang: What was that?

This was pretty good though, I hope to see more from you in the future soon! ja ne!
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