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Rose1948 2008-08-16 ch 20,	abuseThis story is great! I'll wait as long as it takes to read the subsequent chapters. Take care and all the best!
Rose1948 2008-08-16 ch 16,	abuseHey there! Yeah, it's been a while; however I'm slowly catching up on my reading. And giggling. And gathering courage to write my own story. Just one question before I head on to the next chapter: Can anyone be fully briefed on the Tendo Family?
Ravenskc 2008-08-13 ch 20,	abuseI guess we have to let you off the hook this time. Seeing as how you are great with updates. Moving can take a lot out of you, I should know I just moved to. Looking forward to new chapters soon. Tell then I will just have to read the story from the start again.
Roja-Cyd 2008-08-13 ch 20,	abuseOh, all right. pout. I suppose this willa ctually give me time to review every chapter! Have a trouble-free move! Roja.
Sanna Lan 2008-08-09 ch 19,	abusesqueal I just read the whole story, and I really loved it! I would've reviewed for every chapter, but I was too busy reading XD I usually don't like AUs & crossovers, but the synopsis catch my attention and... I'm glad it did. I like a lot your characterization of Akane. She's a very difficult character to write correctly, but you did great. Not too violent and not too wimpy. Ranma on the other hand was pretty OoC at times, but honestly, he really needs to grow up. Being a dragon might have something to do, too... And it's also great how you turned Mu Tzu into a non-wimpy and non-pathetic guy. And the plot is really good, too. The only complaint is that you don't write much bycicle-related stuff, even though it was so important at the beginning. And then Kanami (it's Kaname, actually) and Sousoke (whose name is Sousuke, BTW) appeared! cheers I love those two! I hope to see the rest of the story soon. Write more, plz!
MZephyr 2008-08-08 ch 19,	abuseI'm not generally one to read AU's which deviate so widely from the source material, but I have been silently enjoying your story so far. I am looking forward to more, and seeing who wins the wager. I am concerned, however, in this last chapter that you may be making Mallet-sama too powerful for the good of the story, flying around and hitting people on its own and so forth. It seems like it will soon exceed Mjolnir in capability. Further, is the mighty mallet going to do everything for Akane, or will she be allowed to employ any strength/skill of her own? (Aside from summoning it to do everything for her.)
dragonbharg 2008-08-08 ch 19,	abuseYou are a very good writer and I like the story, but I feel like you've deviated a little to much in the last few chapters. And, the intro of Kanami and Sousuke was a bit abrupt. Otherwise, it is nicely written.
Janzo the Ashbringer 2008-08-08 ch 19,	abuseNice chapter. Beautiful addition to the series, and the crossover meld into the overall scene quite nicely (how many crossover are there anyway, Full Metal Panic, Ranma, anything else?). Characterization is as usual excellent, and character interaction is good as well. The plot has gone through some good changes and so have the Guardian and mates respectively. Tatewaki is still an idiot and somehow it almost seems as though he will be the cause for major alarm in the future. Keep writing, all of us can't wait for the next chapter.
Roja-Cyd 2008-08-06 ch 18,	abuseWoohoo, good for Akane! And thank you Ranma for helping her study...what a sweetie...:) short chapter, but great anyway! Roja.
Roja-Cyd 2008-08-02 ch 17,	abuseExtremely cool chapter! I love it when new characters are so immediately easy to visualize. I've never seen FMP, but I still found the characters extremely entertaining and easy to follow. Great job...and thanks for throwing a bone to us Ranma-Akane fans! Roja.
Angela Jewell 2008-08-01 ch 17,	abusehaha, ooh, the terrifying power of exams. Ranma and Akane are nuts... and Sousuke and Kanami are nuts for actually thinking their behavior is normal! Very funny though. Full Metal Panic seems like it fits in with the zaniness of Ranma very well... they're a lot like Ranma and Akane in some ways. Great choice! I especially like how you chose a male-mate to be Akane's teacher... I was definitely expecting a woman. Can't wait for the next chapter! ^_^
sandcrawlr 2008-07-31 ch 17,	abuseNice chapter, as usual. :)
Angela Jewell 2008-07-30 ch 16,	abuseInteresting! I've never seen Full Metal Panic, but I'm definitely curious now! ^_^ A couple small nit-picks though: when introducing the new characters, you wrote, "Sousoke Chidori that Kanami". As someone who's never seen FMP, I tried to look it up to get an idea of what the characters look like, and was beyond confused, lol. Especially since youtube has TONS of Sousuke/Chidori videos, which only succeeded in confusing me further (I thought Chidori was her first name). You may want to mention something at the end of the chapter, just so other readers who are unfamiliar with it don't think it's some kind of mistake. Especially with the change in last names. Also, several times at the beginning, you were writing Kasumi instead of Kanami. Very interesting additions though! I'm going to have to check that series out sometime! I'm looking forward to see how they all interact together. It should be very interesting. ^_^
Zeful 2008-07-28 ch 16,	abuseChidori? Is there a Kakashi or a Sasuke in the family?... I've read way to much Naruto. And what's a halisen? is it a folded paper fan thing? 'cause I'm sure that's a harrisen. Also it's interesting how each character has deep personality even if it's for only one chapter, like Ubo, it's kind scary.
notenchi 2008-07-28 ch 16,	abuseThank you for a great story! Its been harder finding good Ranma fanfiction lately, and I have looked forward to every update of this. Keep up the good work :)

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