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atlantiandragoness
2008-07-21
ch 8,
abuseawesome! I think the angel transformation makes a lot of sense.
TickleMeButterfly
2008-07-19
ch 8,
abuse*sobs* I'm not first this time! Is was awau from home without internet! NO! *goes into emo corner*

Hey, angels are cool Rhys! Got to love the digi-angels *nods authoritively (if that's a word)*

Er, here's some PMS Cogy! :3 *hands him lemon candies* There yah go XD

Loved the chapter! Go Alissa :D ! How did Wizardmon get cured so suddenly? Was the cream THAT good O.o ?

Lol "And I don't knock you down when I hug you" rofl I love that part XD

And yes, Rhys, I enjoy torturing/loving on you X3 Its fun! >:) *glomps him and shuves chocolate cake in his mouth for no particular reason* Yesh! Lolz.

Great chapter--as always-- and I can't wait for the next chapter-- as always XD!
Heiyu
2008-07-19
ch 8,
abuseGreetings Again,

It has been a busy couple of days for this one, and upon getting home I was overjoyed to find that you had updated. As to my view on what would have happened, that is indeed different from yours.

Wizardmon is my favorite character in the series, thus when he died, I was furious. Later I turned to Fanfiction to ease my irritation on the subject. I enjoy reading if he had lived, as it was sad to let him die, but had he lived I have my own……‘Old Fashion’ views. First: he would have not been so grievously wounded. I know Myotismon attacked him badly, but I believe he would have regained his health and returned to the quest far quicker and in less pain. As to the romance I often see between him and Gotomon, I think they would have simply reminded good friends, not lovers. I think this because of the basis of Digimon Rebirth. When data dies, it is simply reborn at a later date, thus there is no need to sexual interaction. That, and I myself have a great dislike for physical contact, even hugs from my parents make me cringe.

As to his digivolving and being Kari’s second digimon, I highly doubt it. I can see him digivolving into such as you have chosen for him, but not with the help of the tag and crest. He would have been more like Leomon, whom could turn without help when it was needed. I find that him being her second digimon is kind of silly, and is not truly needed.

But these are my views, not yours, and I am not the ones writing this story. You wished to know, and I have told you. I hope you continue to update and a more early basis, as even though my views in a way differ from your own, I truly enjoy the story and will continue to read it and look forward to its completion.

Rhys, as to hurting you, you have given me no reason and I happen to like you, seeing as I have read many of the stories that include you within them……and never let Cogy have TRUE PMS candy lol.
Kyer
2008-07-19
ch 8,
abuseAn angel?
I was under the impression that wizard digimon stayed in that class...or at least only holy champions could evolve into holy ultimates and megas. (Or it could be that I frankly prefer wizards to angels anyway.)

Lord knows I love Wizardmon, but I'd hardly call him 'always' kind. He was rather scathing to Goggle Boy when they first met. I believe his words were "I could care less about you," or something to that effect. He did heal Lilymon, but that could have simply been because they needed her to fight Myotismon and free Gatomon. Let see...as a ghost he utterly ignored everyone in the room save Gatomon.

I think Wizardmon is neither evil nor good, but neutral and a pragmatist. He works hard for Gatomon's benefit. Something like Severus Snape of Harry Potter but with a lot less snark. lol
DarryWizGatoFan
2008-07-18
ch 8,
abuseThat was a great chapter. I just have one question. WHEN ARE WIZZIE AND GATO GOING TO KISS?!
Heiyu
2008-07-10
ch 7,
abuseGreetings,
I hope in posting this review you are motivated to update more often. I enjoy reading your fanfiction, even though my own personal view on what may have happened if Wizardmon had lived is different. Keep up the good work and please update soon, I hate cliffys.

Oh, and Rhys, you will never have to worry about me glomping you or anything else of the nature. I happen to dislike physical contact. I should introduce you to Soran, your dislike for fangirls is something you two share.
atlantiandragoness
2008-07-09
ch 7,
abuseYay update!

so, when Wizzie's sick he sleep talks like Tai does?
TickleMeButterfly
2008-07-09
ch 7,
abuserofl XD 'I like I waffles..." So cute! lol X3 Purely priceless. And then, "NO I DON'T WANT SYRUP!" OMG I busted up laughing XD rofl Why WAS Wizardmon dreaming about waffles ~,^ ?

Dark Masters 0.0 I hope they'll be okay. What happened to them all? Why dragons? Who sent the dragons? bum Bum BUM~! I'll wait eagerly to find out what happens... darn cliffies >.> Even if they do keep me interested ^^'

lol Cogy still has the PMS candy XD can I have one? I love sour candy XD hahah.

and now, for my usual torture, that fills me with such happiness. RHYS! HAVE A GOOD TIME ON YOUR DATE!... but first :D *glomps and shuves candy in his mouth* lol and we mustn't forget Cogy! *snatches up Cogy and snuggles/glomps him and Rhys* Yayz! digi-love... but not in a romantic way!

Thanks for the splattered hints of WizGato! I appreciated it muchly XD I know its mean but... I had to enjoy Tai's teasing X3

Once again, I eagerly await your update!
Trudy Heine
2008-06-20
ch 6,
abuseHi there, I love this story and I was wondering when you were going to update the next chapter - since I want to see what happens next? Thanks.
DarryWizGatoFan
2008-06-12
ch 6,
abuseHey, I want to hug Rhys! Tai is so not mature. But it was funny. Poor Kari and Wizzie! =( I hope that they get better and that Wizzie and Gato kiss. (Ahh, no more chocolate.)
atlantiandragoness
2008-06-07
ch 6,
abuselol, Rhys doesn't like fangirls (then again, most guys don't) Bet he wouldn't mind if Calanetta glomped him XD

Tai should be banned from story-telling...-_-'
TickleMeButterfly
2008-06-07
ch 6,
abuseO.O What WILL happen to Wizardmon? Will Kari be Okay? Will there be any adorably fluffy scenes between T.K. and Kari, Joe and Mimi, and Tai and Sora? And what about all our main conern paring? WizGato?! I know it shouldn't be too long now, and you're right, cliffies keep me and everyone else interested ^^!

Yay! Glomping Rhys all I want? Its like a digimon dream come true =^^= -glomps Rhys- Yay for Rhys! I luv you! But no worries, I won't steal you from your wife O.O That'd be mean! Oh, yes! Glomps for for Cogy too XD -glomps them both-

(Too much chocolate for me again >.> ... I've got to stop doing that...)

Update soon please!
TickleMeButterfly
2008-05-27
ch 5,
abuseAw! TT_TT POOR WIZARDMON! He deserves chocolate. You should have Gatomon give him chocolate in the next chapter ^^ Yes, i'm very stupid lol XP

HAPPY BIRTHDAY RHYS! HERES SOME CAKE! Cogy gets sum too, cux he's adorable :P

YAY! GLOMPS FOR RHYS! *Smiles innocently but inside is grinning evilly* LUV YOU RHYS! *glomps him painfully and won't let go* rofl

(In case you're wondering, yes, I'm high... on sugar XD)
atlantiandragoness
2008-05-27
ch 5,
abuseCandeena returns! Poor, poor wizzie. I agree, he must've been a cute Demidevimon

Happy birthday Rhys! *hug* *gives Cogy a hug too, just cause*
YusukiShredder
2008-05-26
ch 4,
abuseOMG! What will happen? What IS the matter with Matt? O.o

Yup, you didn't mess up Rhys ^^ Isn't that great? -glomps him and Cogy-

Very good, can't wait for the next chappie!! :D
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