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Lol Lem does really look like pegases now that I think about it :3

Dahlia

Lol omg Pat and Lilia? xD Nice going Pat! :3 xD

I lol'd. This is so freaking epic! :'D

Lol xD This was funny

hahahahahahahahahahaha!

I can't believe it! It's so funny! Please write more!

This made me laugh a lot

.Heaven.

Hahaha! This chapter was funny!

Spider: You must return him to his real form!

Rion: His less feminine side?

Spider: Sure..

Parano: You got to admit he really liked his Nitro side

thats so messed up yet halarious!

keep up the good work D

monochrome_jester i don't plan on stopping anytime soon plus you responded rather quickly so I'll make more!

OH ANOTHER ANOTHER PLEASE! LOL I love these! Needs lots o parano ... parano drools

hina

XD OMG I had to like keep myself from laughing out loud in class reading this! PLEASE MAKE MORE! PLEASE! With more parano-kun and his mental retartedness X3

HOBOS! Oo AH! FEAR THE HOBOS! D: lol thsi is retarded but hilarious so please continue.

OH MY GOD THIS IS SO FUNNY. As soon as i read it i cracked up laughing XD please continue i've never laughed so much at a story

hehehe this one is very as well, you sure write funny fanfictions!

hahahaha! chapter two was funny! nice on, we'll make up some more ideas on Monday alright!

hahaha! nice one, i never knew that you would acually put it up! its very funny, i fell out of my chair! you should write about the ones we talked about today in school in Math. Its going to be funny!