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good story.

awesome story...poor Lucy...really sad to think about her situation...I feel pity for her...I love the way you write...its just brilliant! it brought tears in my eye :(...my fav author :)

Just bloody splendid! Wish you would add more. And also to "Lily's Eyes". The angst and anticipation of betrayal, sorrow and lies are eagerly awaited. You write it so, so well.

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Aw Poor heartbroken Lucy. My heart so goes out to her. It makes me want to reread TCotH again, which makes my heart hurt and makes me a hosepipe. I loved reading this. You're one of my favorite ff authors and always will be. I loved Edmund's protectivness of Lucy, it's so in characther. Susan contunes to disappoint me. She's should open her eyes to how she's being. Of we all know that doesn't happen. Poor Susan's going to miss her family.

I just wanted to ask if Peter was ever going to find out the truth? And they could tell Susan, even if she wouldn't believe them. I think since Edmund knows, then they should know too... and maybe even Eustace and Jill and Polly and Digory

this was a great story here.

i added the whole song because it touches my heart! and i think it would touch other people's heart. apparently not yours! and what's wrong with sapphire eyes and a love interest for Edmund? it's always a girl for Peter and if Edmund likes her, he never gets her! I don't like you alright? I've seen you trash and discourage some other writers in reviews!

your going to be a bitch and so am i!

How sad. Poor Lucy. I really liked how you wrote from Edmund's pov. I think you did an excellent job with that.

-Ellie

I've just discovered your writing tonight, and in one sitting I've read the Call of the Horn and this- they're just wonderful! Do you get a chance to update often? I'm floored by the wonderful-ness of this story and can't wait for the next chapter! :)

ahh amazing, period!

this is pretty interesting

please update soon

love always

hisanachan

Yay! I really do adore this fic! I love how Edmund is the central...how should I call it? Story teller? He is, in a way, and focuses on his relationship with Lucy as she tells the truth of her heartbreak. The question on pity is truly a valuable one. A fantastic read, it is wonderful! Have fun in Florida! Be safe and all!

nice but sad.

lovely story!

Ali! It was a lovely chapter, indeed I loved the way Edmund and Lucy got closer as brother and sister... it was really tender, believe me- the only fault I struggled to find was that it was a bit short :S

Thanks a lot for the note on the bottom of the chapter! It really means a lot to me that you are so kind to thank me... Believe it, it really is my pleasure to read your wonderful stories! They are truly nurtruring!

I think I'm going to read The Heart of the Matter! Oh, and let's not forget: praised be the Lord for Google! Yeah! xD

I hope you spend a wonderful time in Florida! Rest and party a lot, ok? Hugs!