Very good. The style of this story flowed well, and the characters were all very IC (In-Character). My largest complaint is that it could have been longer, but this captures Annabeth's feelings very well at this point in time. The facts she spouted off were a little too obviously taken from the Sphinx's questions in Battle of the Labyrinth, and there were a few mistakes, but you are a good writer and show a lot of promise.

Don't forget that she kissed him! Or the fact that Luke has blue eyes. I feel sorta betrayed by Luke cuz i thought he was AWESOME! in the first book, until i found out he was a backstabber which made me eternally hate him. Whats worse is that he...fused? bodies with kronos which is WRONG in so many ways! *sigh* ah well...Love PJO to death! Have u read Percy Jackson and the Stolen Chariot? Its a short story that u can read on Rick Riordan's blog. just type in Percy Jackson and the Stolen Chariot part 1 and u'll find it ^^

On a side note, i love your fanfics! Awesome job, keep it up~!

i dont ant her to b in luv with thalia. gay, poeple, gay! :(

wonderful story! Hope Rick makes her choose anytime now...

I liked it a lot! :)

Really quite good. I liked it.

Great job! I'm glad to see more of your writing. ^^ I reviewed your other story. =)

I really liked it. =)