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| blank101 2008-07-21 ch 8, | abuseReally enjoyed this; well-written, and the characterizations seem spot-on. A nice little warm-up to TR. I liked the layers of subtelty here that Mara and Luke's relationship have, plus the fact that Luke is very *human*. People tend to make him all-powerful the moment he becomes a Jedi, but I think he carries the saem character flaws that he always did, andhim hbleness and his attempts to appease everybody are very Luke. Mara too is well-written, not too overbearing, as she often seems both in the official books and fanfic; hey, *nobody* can be that angry all the time! Great pacing and completely addictive. Off to start TR now :) |
| Game3525 2008-06-15 ch 1, | abuseGreat story, I too did not like stories after the T. This is a good AU rewrite of everything! |
2008-06-02 ch 8, anon. | abuseWow. Creepy prophecy. I loved the bit with the supposed marriage proposal--that was quite hilarious. I also liked Mara's taking care of Luke, heh. You have a nice blend of humor and a good handle on the characters. This was a great intro, and I now I shall pop on over to Tyranny Reborn! |
| VoxynQueen 2008-05-30 ch 5, | abuseI only just started reading this chapter, but just had to say how happy I was to see words for Chewie. Hate it when its just, 'Chewie growled in agreement.' Made my day! |
| JadeTakashi 2008-05-26 ch 9, | abuseoh i can't wait for that to get started. i really can't. that was absolutely awesome. absolutely awesome. I await the tyranny of this. I really do. so many questions you must now answer. so many things that fic must now reveal. if that's just the first part of the trilogy, i can only imagine what the other two will consist of. han as an admiral? oh he must love that... leia hiding her identity..in the SENATE? that can't be good at all. yep, I'll be keeping two eyes out for this. The Unseen War? alright, I'll be waiting anxiously for that. JT |
| Lilith Kayden 2008-05-26 ch 9, | abuseI will very much be looking forward to Episode I of Tyranny Reborn. Hopefully the following chapters will come quickly as well. --Lilith Kayden |
| Vasara 2008-05-26 ch 9, | abuseHoly crap how I'd like to see Sidereal and that teaser trailer turned into a real movie and beyond... they contain like, all that is essential in Star Wars - and it ain't spoiled with something so lame as bad writing. I mean sheesh, how many good stories have had to 'buy the farm' because of it? Too many. But hey, I can cope if only you're going to stick with your upcoming story and really write about all the events that teaser trailer is flashing us... I don't really need to see the movie version, the story in itself would be enough, thank you ;) |
| SkykhanHunter 2008-05-26 ch 1, anon. | abuseAw no! I didn't want it to end! This is great. Love the way you got Luke's character bang on the mark. Only request, can you get into Mara's head a bit? Other than that, keep up the good work! |
| JadeTakashi 2008-05-26 ch 8, | abuseWell, I'd forgotten that their are so many lovely redheads about the galaxy. (here I use the word lovely very very loosely) and I can take a gander at what exactly Leida wanted from poor Luke. Now, on to the actual review: Wonderful chapter, love the interaction here. Elrood bodes ill for even the most trained of jedi so Mara had better watch her back while shes out there. I'm still wondering what this darkness is all about, and must here place the point that I am really agreeing with your rewriting of the places between T and the hand of thrawn. I actually liked whatever follows that (the exception of course being this crazy legacy series, I'm still trying to get my head around it). So, what a way to end this story, Kent. I like your cliffs. They are very interesting. So when she returns, everything will have changed? well, I for one, will be anxiously awaiting her return. JT |
| wbsaw 2008-05-26 ch 8, anon. | abuseNice foreshadowing... The name would seem to indicate a Sith... "He no longer has a master to ask questions of (and I loathed the idea of him arbitrarily declaring himself a Master ala the JA series because of the arrogance it implies".. Well, Thats just It..there is no one else to declare:"You are now a master"..UNless he gets a Yoda vision, he's going to have to declare himself master..sooner or later... Lets get the next story up, hm? |
| Bluenblack 2008-05-26 ch 8, | abuseI look forward to the next story. Hurry! |
| PhantomKnight88 2008-05-26 ch 8, | abuseYou better get 'The Unseen War I: Tyranny Reborn' out soon or I'll...I'll...Ok I don't know what I'd do but this is one of the best stories I've ever read; very origional and actually believable. I also don't much like many of the books after TLC (Though I do own most, if not all the books), all Timothy Zahn books being the exception, the Legacy of the Force (book five and beyond specifically) are the worst in history |
| JadeTakashi 2008-05-25 ch 7, | abuseDarkness? ah, the plot comes out... ok. so redheads are the bane of our favorite master Jedi? oh...that could prove to be an interesting tidbit of information. poor Luke, suffering leia's parties... and what's with Leida? why doesn't she like Luke? or did i just miss some subtle bit of fluff in there? dude, the convolution is beginning to come out. (and i just had a strange twist of thought that I will not disclose for others to see, but it planted a possible idea...) for now, i will refrain from trying to analytically figure this out... for now... i await the next chapter. JT |
| love lotr 2008-05-25 ch 7, | abuseI am really enjoying your version of the EU, I can't say I've liked any of the scattered ones I've read, so I am interesting in your original ideas. This is also really well-written, and it flows nicely! great job |
| Bluenblack 2008-05-25 ch 7, | abuseA series of sketches that, taken together, make up a tapestry. |