Reviews for The Lucky Ones

Reviews For: The Lucky Ones

dannightshade 2008-06-03 ch 1,	abuseI blush too when i write M rated stories, only cause I'm currently single, anyway its a good story, i liked it and i hope you feel the need to write M again in this context cause your so good. Fantastic Story.
DragonPhoenix16 2008-05-25 ch 1,	abusevery nice. I like it!
AngelTrisha9 2008-05-17 ch 1,	abusethat was good! that was so good! you can't stop there, please don't stop there!
Foxie Roxie 2008-05-17 ch 1,	abusethat was great, i loved it! xx
icantthinkofone 2008-05-16 ch 1,	abusehey this was tasteful and really sweet i love how your writing isn't packed with cliques nice job you should definetly add to this ~chloe
FallenForBnB 2008-05-16 ch 1,	abusewell, i gotta say, if you're unexperienced in writing M rated pieces, it certainly didn't show. because this was just amazing and totally hot. i mean the ending was sad of course (though still awesome), but the rest totally amazing.
irony882 2008-05-16 ch 1, anon.	abuseI'm really glad you made this hazy. The only somewhat clear part was the end, as the readers realize that the past was nothing more than a flashback. It really emphasizes Brennan and the current situation she's in. Love your "what could have happened" piece. You nailed both characters, spot on. Booth's words were just sweet enough to make readers sigh in contentment. As for the M-rated part, I'm not usually a huge fan of it, but you've written very tastefully and vividly.
CSI-4077 2008-05-16 ch 1,	abuseI think that was very good, even the M stuff. Really, terrific job! “Irrationality,” he said softly, a feral grin sneaking onto his face. “It’s kind of sexy, Bones.” I loved that line! Keep up the good work and I hope you did well on your test! Leah
shelby 2008-05-16 ch 1, anon.	abuseI loved it. I have 1 question, Will he live or die?
BxBforever 2008-05-16 ch 1,	abusewow cool awesome good
xBeMinex 2008-05-16 ch 1,	abuseyou cant just leave it there, is he going to come back to her, I NEED TO KNOW, please contuine, your doing a great job x
Aching Bones 2008-05-16 ch 1,	abuseHi there, This was beautiful...so well written. Loved how he said "I’ll protect you, I’ll do whatever it takes. Just please stop throwing yourself in harm’s way, babe.” That's just what he did in "Wannabe". Jumped in front of the gun to protect her and got shot in the process himself. Finally she realised the fear of really losing him and how HE feared for her on a daily basis... The most part of this piece (the lovemaking part) was just so sweet and how I could imagine it being between these two. They are just so good together... Loved it...want more...you are really good. Ger
TemperTemper 2008-05-15 ch 1,	abuseNo need to blush (although hard not to when you write this stuff isn't it?!) This was fab! I loved this: He rested at her stomach, dropping his head there. She sighed, his head an unfamiliar, yet comforting weight. Light, early morning stubble prickled at her lower abdomen while the tips of his soft hair brushed the bottom of her breasts. -- such a real image. And I loved the fact that Booth got such pleasure from her stroking her fingers through his hair. And the 'you weren't supposed to be right' was so sad! Great job :)
HollywoodDramaQueen 2008-05-15 ch 1,	abuseAw, I like it. Especially the last line. Pretty good considering you wrote it on a two inch piece of paper. I'm assuming you were taking an AP test or something similiar. I was in one this morning and kept wishing I had paper to write on. Good job!
Hazmatt 2008-05-15 ch 1,	abuseGreat story! I really enjoyed it! Wonderful!

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