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| skywalker05 2008-05-15 ch 1,  | abuseInteresting! I like the large amount of time you span in such a short amount of words, comparing the characters' very young days to their current, very late ones. I liked the detail about the "Flameout"'s properties. You set up a visible scene very quickly, which is quite an accomplishment--good sentence organization. Cool tie in to both the Prequel and Original trilogies. |