Reviews for Gollums Betrayal

Telcontar Rulz
2008-05-16
ch 1,

abuseCome little hobbits, we must go now! Must make haste!

-Thank you Smèagol. Sam, victory is near!-

It’s our victory, not yours, that we will taste

That's my favourite bit. It's a very nice rhyme, and it fits in perfectly with Gollum's character.

You have a couple of spelling mistakes in your summary. 'betrayel' should be 'betrayal', and I think you mean 'poem' or 'poetry' instead of 'poet', which is the person who writes poetry.

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