Totally awesome
ony one problem
WASN'T LONG ENOUGH! gee =(

This was brilliant, absolutely brilliant. I wish you'd write more. =P

OMG, yay! I love Kyle/FemJaden! More, more more! :D :D :D

I really enjoyed this...like wow.

I found your writing style to be great ^^ kinda wish ya'd add a second chapter *hinthint*

Niice... I always thought there was something dodgy that Kyle never expressed any sort of interest in a skimpily-dressed female right beside him, in the depths of space... =D

Nice... I hope you plan on doing an introspective for jaden about her covert fall to the darkside killing rosh is just way to much fun.

Nice fic there. Dunno why you havent got any reviews yet, its pretty nice. You just left a small leftover (of a previous drabble, perhaps?) at the start of the story.

:P Aside from that, i cant think of anything bad to say about this.


Now, give me my cookie!

Bye