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| Sweety8587 2008-07-25 ch 11, | abuseBUWAHA! *spits out her drink in surprise* Well I'll be a monkey's aunt! I didnt expect Yori to go and ask THAT Aidou! I thought she might ask him to come with her on the holidays but damn! Y' GO girl! But wait...if he says yes then she and Aido'll have done it before Zero and Yuuki...then again those two have done plenty other stuff *snickers* though..*giggles at Yori's reaction* its like shes stuck in shock. but of the good kind! And Aidou *slaps him back while laughing* get some control over that mouth of yours! |
| VaneCaos 2008-07-25 ch 11, | abuseArgh!-falls of the chair, gasping for air- I was about to write you my first review of 'No matter what' saying that Yori and Aido's relationship was progressing slower than Yuuki and Zero's. Well! You finished with that perception with the last sentence. Now, I believe that Yori is a far more resoluted girl than Yuuki.ç I can't wait for the next chapter! |
| MeaKuran 2008-07-25 ch 11, | abuseHaha theres gonna be some interesting stuff next chapter i can feel it! Yay brave Yori! Sweet chapter! |
| flaming-amber 2008-07-24 ch 10, | abuseAnd here comes the ultimate reality check of all. It'll only get harder from here on in I'm afraid as you now have the responsibility of coming up with a way to resolve this issue of human X vampire pairing. Sigh... I rather liked this chapter. Two different people from two different worlds that are so divergent from each other but what they're trying to build... will either break them apart from their previous happy existences or change things for both... I guess this is where the angst will really begin. Hope that you stay with us through this and finish your wonderful story. Congratulations on coming this far by the way! |
| NAH-CHAN 2008-07-23 ch 10, | abusei love this chapter...it remember me a other manga called ..hana yori dango... and yori remembered makino...she doesn´t belive in a love with a rich gauy because she was poor..but doumyoji the most rich guy in japan fall in love with her...and they surpass every enimies in their love...I LOVE HANA YORI DANGO..i read manga and saw the dorama..and i hope see the movie as soon as possible, but in brazil don´t have yet...i just remeber so much hana yori dango in this chapter that i want read again the manga of hanadan...update soon as possible the other part and the otthers chapters of hold me...i´m so excited to see zero and yuki lovey-dovey i can´t wait any loger... kissus natasha from brazil |
| elemental heiress 2008-07-23 ch 10, | abuseWAW!Poor Yori and Aido!Plz continue soon. |
| MoonCrisis 2008-07-23 ch 10, | abuseThis was a mix of fluff and sad XD I like that... x3 Now we have to wait and see what happens... I can't wait.. x3 |
| RedMapleLeaf 2008-07-23 ch 10, | abuseomg, i can feel the drama! i totally love it !! and i agree with kain, hanabusa has it bad. update! ps i dont noe but r u planning 2 write a fanfic about ruka and kain, i dont noe much about this couple but if u r goin 2 write then i will definitely read it |
| AgateLinks 2008-07-23 ch 10, | abuseWhat...? Impending separation? hew... i hope you're not talking about real separation here. only separation because of holiday is coming and all. oh, so this is why the chapter is having a melancholy feel. i'm understand why Aidou can't take Yori to his home, the same way that Yori can't take him to her home. what would their parents do if they caught their kids in love with someone from different race? it will be a mess... =sigh= i feel sorry for both yori and aidou. they are a star crossed lover. however, since their case is a complicated one, i'm really interested in finding how you will craft a way out for them. they deserved that anyway. but aside from all the hopelessness of their condition, it's so sweet to find that actually, they have fall pretty bad for each other. who would've thought that a playboy vampire can really fall? and a levelheaded human girl can fall for a vampire? it's a law defiying act, to put it straight. =grins= but it certainly a good thing. like how yuuki put a line to describe her friend: "Her smile starts in her eyes." reading their provided thoughts, i catch that aidou actually can follow yori home, but she didn't ask him. while yori want to follow hanabusa home, but she couldn't. Arrghh... it's so frustrating. please, one of you, change your mind would you!? aidou, don't you remmeberthat you have a promise with yuuki not to take away Yori's smile? or do we need another help from Kaname-sama again?? (why kaname turned out to be a love savior here? =giggles=) oh, i LOVE Aidou and Kain little conversation in their room! at the untintentional comeback coming from Aidou that startled Kain. lol, you know, Kain, just like a lyric from a song: 'it doesn't take a genius to read between the lines.' everybody who's attentive enough know that you have it for Ruka, talking about the obvious. and of course someone as perceptive as yori didn't need others to inform her! =smirks= now, now, this is what i like about yori. not only she have a perfect personality match for aidou, she also bring out his good side. so happy to see that there's some positive change inside our favorite blond-haired noble :) please update soon! |
| springblossem 2008-07-23 ch 10, | abuseaw such a cute story please update soon, aw i wish Yori-chan was a vampire oh maybe Sayori's family could be vampire but they kept it from her to keep her safe i dunno -ep! fangirl moment- anywhoo really good job! can't wait until your next update. Cya Sprigblossem... |
| Fabulous Georgina 2008-07-23 ch 10, | abuseYAY!! I was rather impressed by this chapter and I understand the necessity for some melancholy. It turned out quite good anyway! Thanks for the update and please post again soon! |
| Sinnara 2008-07-23 ch 10, | abuseOh my goodness, i haven't read you fanfic for a while and i must say... this is my favorite chapter so far! This chapter had the sense of hope and despair... it was so sad... even if they aren't together, i hope they get good endings... |
| CampionSayn 2008-07-23 ch 10, | abuseSa! A quick up-date as usual. Ah, this was so simple and so sweet, I felt like I was observing something they might put up for a play. I loved this chaptter. Why? Well, because you obviously worked very ** it and because, well, mixed fluff with sap is so much better than the usual, plain fluff! You doing very well. Very well. |
| Alessa in Wonderland 2008-07-23 ch 10, | abuseAwie, still not first. Well, forbidden love it is. (Grins.) You updated sooner than expected... AGAIN. (Shakes head.) This is just my opinion, but Yori seems like an only child. Well, unless those older brothers 'help' Yori 'practice' her patience... That is... yeah, I'm not making any sense. Anyhow, I'm glad you made this 'sadder' than the other chappies, 'cause I've been wondering for a while. You know, about how Aido's parents will think about their noble son dating a 'low-class commoner girl'. (If they're not as bubbly as I imagine them to be, then that would probably be what they'd say.) Anyhow, great job again. I don't know how I'm going to handle Aido and Yori being separated... unless, that is, you twist it up a little bit. (Grins.) |
| Hinataxx 2008-07-23 ch 10, | abuseLoved the lastest chapter! I was wondering when you would bring up the fact obstacles of Aido and Yori being together. I must say you did it brillantly! Great work. :) |