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| Don-Jam 2008-06-07 ch 4,  | abusePOOR Gwen! I do NOT like Kevin! BENxGwen forever! Very Good Work. |
| takari-sasusakulover 2008-05-31 ch 3, anon. | abuseCome on, continue... |
| takari-sasusakulover 2008-05-31 ch 2, anon. | abuseJust a little too much, don't you think? But still, it's cool. |
| takari-sasusakulover 2008-05-31 ch 1, anon. | abuseGood so far. |
| badkidoh 2008-05-20 ch 4, | abusethat was pretty good, poor gwen. the ben gwen part at the the end could have been longer but it's alright. |
| FredandGeorgetwinsoftheC.O.... 2008-05-18 ch 4, | abuseCute ending. So, was there any particular reason you chose those specific aliens as culprits? Just curious. Although I gotta say, if that kept happening to Gwen, you'd think that Max would separate the two and guard her rather than hanging out with friends. |
| bwen tennyson 2008-05-16 ch 3, anon. | abuseGwen is worrying ... be abused by alien? Avoid writing Gwen being abused every 5 lines! |