really really good .

I'm so in love with this story! Can't wait to see where this will be leading!

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Wow... what a really hot chapter... they finally get together, and Clarisse did most of the intiating, while Joe was scared...
I think my favourite parts would have to be...
- 'You usually don't have so much trouble to know when it's time for talking, and when it's time for action, do you?'
- 'What a sight'
- 'Shall we take this elsewhere...'
-'are you scared of Rupert?'. Is that obvious.. 'He's more scared of me at the moment than you are of him'
Great chapter!

Great chapter!

I love that Joe is a bit worried that the king might fry him. ha ha!

Ah, interesting!! I was so glad, as usual, to find this story had been updated. I can't wait to see where the story is going from here. Great job, and please update soon! =D

Funny, Secret Service! Hopefully it doesn't come to that!hehe

You´re back, and with Coconuts no less!
´I can be serious in the morning, right now I just want to sleep with you, do you think that could somehow be arranged?´ I can just imagine her saying that.

I'm really really really glad they made love!! *happy sighs* I wonder what's going to happen...

Okay, I've been reading this for the 10th time... where is the rest?

Hehe, this is great! Verry evil, indeed, but very great. =D I love it. Please do continue ASAP!

oh! just don't tell me he'll stop her! i couldn't possibly live after such disappointment... oh! lol i could but... i hope they'll just... sorry that's you story. i'm just still hoping lol

Come on, Joe! Jesus, please update soon...you left me very sad I wanted more! *low whistle* Anywho, i'm just going to walk away and pretend I didn't write anything except update soon.

Oh my gosh, what a chapter this was! Clarisse seducing Joseph!
My fave parts:
-'Are you really upset about this, or are you angry that he humilated you?'
-'Go on, if we keep up this pace we'll never finish it' (lol!)
- she questioning what it would be like to be married to him!
-Again, Clarisse seducing him...'now stop arguing and get out of your damn shirt'

Love the revenge angle with the coconut cake! Serves him right, and I hope you put his reaction in the story somewhere!
Also loved the interaction and casual conversation between the two of them!

I absolutely love the story, but can you please please write Joseph the right way? Please.