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Lady Henrietta 2008-10-27 . chapter 15
Very touching chapter. I loved the Bill/Saul scenes. I look forward to the reunion between Bill and Laura. I remember Sin Qua Non, a poignant show that really showed how Bill was connected to Laura. You've brought that through. Nice job :D.
McGonagallFan 2008-09-15 . chapter 14
0o0o0o0ohh...please please update soon. I want to know who Gaia's father is. Can't wait.
Mamabella 2008-09-15 . chapter 14
I was glad to finally see this updated~ this mystery does deepen but I cant wait for more I hope you get and stay unburied so you can write more-lol cant wait for the next chapter.
Lady Henrietta 2008-09-15 . chapter 14
You gave us a teaser. I can't wait to find out who Gaia's father is. I want to know what happens! Good chapter. Gaia's line is funny. You did a good job with the scene from Guess What's Coming to Dinner. Nice job :D.
BossaNovaBaby24 2008-08-18 . chapter 13
it was worth the wait! :D

aww man this was so sweet! bless Adama going to see her and sitting by her!

loving the Gaia storyline, really keeping me on edge here! So she IS Roslin's daughter, but she's keeping it from her for a reason, eh?

Loved the not having to explain herself sentence, mirroring her mother ;)

very well written and i shall wait patiently for more! :D

i love this story!
McGonagallFan 2008-08-18 . chapter 13
I hope you update soon. I want to know the reason why she doesn't want to tell Laura that she is her daughter.
Mamabella 2008-08-18 . chapter 13
Well Im glad to see the update, and sorry to hear our life is insane- I hope that you will get it done soon- I would like to know the reason why she wont tell Laura and why did Matthews not take her back to her mother and who's her real father- when she was 13 she could have told her and had her mother back-
Lady Henrietta 2008-08-18 . chapter 13
I understand being busy, believe me. This was an interesting chapter indeed. That's so cool, having Gaia be Laura's daughter. And I love the quite reading moments between Bill and Laura. Good chapter. Nice job :D.
McGonagallFan 2008-07-25 . chapter 12
I love her hair. :D Hope you update soon. Stupid school.
Lady Henrietta 2008-07-23 . chapter 12
School eats time, I know. Lovely chapter. I like Gaia's reaction to the package, being bugged that nobody told her it wasn't a bomb. I thought it was a wig. Yay Bill for going and staying with Laura. I wonder what will happen with those two in the morning. Nice job :D.
Mamabella 2008-07-23 . chapter 12
I liked the Chapter a lot~ I liked the addition of Laura loosing her hair! I really want to see another chapter but i do understand the need for school work (begrudgingly) I hope we get some more insight on laura's and Gaia's History.
BossaNovaBaby24 2008-07-23 . chapter 12
i love the hair i love the hair i love the hair ... oh did i tell you that i love the hair? so 2 chapters on that ... thats love! :D

absolutely squee but with a tissue for the last bit :( d'oh Bill because he doesn't know!

loved it and can't wait for the next chapter, but DO YOUR ASSIGNMENTS! that's an order!
Lady Henrietta 2008-07-19 . chapter 11
I agree with you, in the show the transition of her losing her hair was too short. I like your version better. I suspect that the package is just a wig, though they are doing the right thing, being cautious about it. Bill's discovery was well done. And laptops really stink sometimes. Good chapter. I look forward to the next one. Nice job :D.
Mamabella 2008-07-19 . chapter 11
Glad to see the update, i really did love this chapter with the hair issue~ hope you Computer issues are solved soon. cant wait to read more!!
McGonagallFan 2008-07-19 . chapter 11
Nice update. Update soon. I really want to know what is in the package.
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