that went way to fast. they just met after three years and three minutes later they're cleaning eachother's mouth. great idea, it just needs to be drawn out.

OMG its awesome! i hope u write more

I'm tryin to seperate the chapters but i don't no how plz help!

What is that creep Itachi up to? Please update soon.

dude u posted the same thing 3 times wtf

yo sorry i haven't updated i have the next chapter just waiting to upload thanx for the patience

OMG SO CUTE:) datobaye please write more

Jenny: GUYS what do u tink
Sakura: Naruto was mine...
Jenny: never sakura deal with it allright
Hinat: *blush*
Naruto: *blush* happy yo
jenny: aw so cute:) please keep the good work up..want to know more...

The chapters have repeated a bit. Please try to fix it and keep going with the story.

How sweet.

cute, but strech it out and have more fluff for romance. let him sing 'forever&ever' by barry white to her at a karaoke bar. I know its saucy but it works.

Um, it has a good plot. You just need to make the chapters longer, change a couple spelling mistakes, and separate each chapter.