Great tag to the episode! "The Paradise Syndrome" really leaves a giant gap at the end... not even a witty comment between our three favorite men on the Enterprise! This story really wraps up that episode nicely for me. Kudos!

After reading the last two lines, I do not dare not to review. :) I liked it.

Great Kirk-McCoy friendship story! I wish it had been longer though, I liked it alot!

Oh I love the Spock brow!

Great story, but wouldn't Spock be all over sick-bay chasing Kirk to make his poor little head right again after he mucked it up?

I really liked it. Rather sad though. - Catlover

Nice, very nice. . . but one more threatening move towards McCoy... I know I know, I'm the only McCoy fan I swear...

Very well done! I could picture it all in my mind. Who needs TV?

Very deep and touching. Nice job. LLM

I always wondered what happened after he left the planet. Grief takes many forms. Thank you for your insight.

Not bad at all, I would have liked to see more Spock/Kirk but McCoy was belieavable

Not bad at all, I would have liked to see more Spock/Kirk but McCoy was belieavable

great storie pleese keep more coming :)

Seriously, where do you people get this stuff from?

Nice story. Keep it up.