Captivating. That's the only word for this.

Truly, beautifully, utterly, hypnotically CAPTIVATING.

I couldn't stop reading, the way you write is just delicious and tangible and you make the most of every word you use and sometimes simplistic words at heart lead to the most complex emotions in turn.

You really made my heart bend, snap, twist and turn. As much of a fan of Irvine x Selphie as I am, this new angle on their relationship really unique and fascinating.

That Selphie might not be satisfied, that she might be envious and have a little bit of an ugly side to her for thinking so, that Irvine isn't the man she's dreamed of but the man she's dreamed of wouldn't be the Irvine she needs anyways.

You know?

You write with a magic that I've seen in enough authors that I can count on one hand. You have something special that I'd love to read more of, that I'm dying to read more of, really.

You make the English language something... more.

And the ending...

Somehow, it was a sudden twist but entirely, wholly, and irrevocably perfect.

Words can't express how much I enjoyed reading this.

I can only hope that you might have some inkling of an idea ;)

- WAS

I really liked this! Not many people try to analyze Selphie much. I thought this was interesting and insightful.

I liked it. I do like your writting style and I do like your Selphie. 'cause, you know, I've never thought about her personality and her feelings during the game. You wrote her so deep, and her relationship with Irvine was so interesting in your interpretation - so, I liked it. Good work.