 happyhooligan2001 2008-05-28 . chapter 1Those were kind of poetic in a way. Did you ever think about writing poetry? |
 Sheady 16 2008-05-25 . chapter 1 Nicely done. Sorry I''m too tired to provide more detailed feedback though. |
 ALICE IT'S RAINing 2008-05-20 . chapter 1brillant
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 Kraken's Ghost 2008-05-16 . chapter 1Very nice, modest fic. Sometimes it's what's not said that more important than what is. Nice job. |
 angel0wonder 2008-05-16 . chapter 1This was really sweet. My favorite ones are FLOWERS, HAPPINESS, and PEACE. |