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| Bloodmist-Exile 2008-05-16 ch 2,  | abuseThis fic, and this chapter of it, is very good. I particularly liked this chapter because I think that Gaara was kept in-character very well. I also adored the part where Kankurou stood up to help Gaara and I think it was written very well. On the constructive criticism side, the grammer was occasionally a little off, but not so much as to detract from the story. Keep writing! Exile. |