 KaguraTheWindGypsy 2009-11-08 . chapter 7lol i liked that one. ^_^ |
 OTP 2009-10-31 . chapter 7lol very cute and sweet glompie luvs hugs and pocky
teal'c |
 1st Lieutenant Riza Hawkeye 2009-10-29 . chapter 7I had no idea Edward felt that way! lol, I liked it, it was very cute! |
 Lyny Angell 2009-10-29 . chapter 7That's adorable. Aww, Ed's not quite as clueless as well all think he is sometimes! lol. Anyway, very cute. I love when authors write other characters perspectives on the Royai relationship. Very cute and well done!
Love
Lyny |
 Silvery Mist 2009-10-28 . chapter 7That was really cute! :) |
 Emi-Chan18 2009-10-19 . chapter 6I liked this it was different but really good |
 OTP 2009-10-19 . chapter 6o this was short and sweet glompie you want phrase prompts huh?hm i'll have to think of a few for you luvs hugs and pocky!
teal'c |
 Lyny Angell 2009-10-18 . chapter 6Ooh, I like this one, too. It's such a simple answer, but it's so TRUE! =) The only word prompt I can think of is: Desert Fever. I'm in the middle of a fic with that title right now, and I find myself suddenly curious to see what you would do with it ;) Again, cute chapter. I wasn't sure you were ever gonna update this one again, lol.
Love from
Lyny Angell |
 Tuesady 2009-07-28 . chapter 4And how quiet this chapter was but how much you can visualize. Bravado. This story of yours seems like a conversation, but they don't even interact directly verbally! How funny. |
 Tuesady 2009-07-28 . chapter 3I like the way you introduced this chapter, with the definiton of the photgrapher and the transsition to Hawkeye. And I could picture Hawkeye bittersweetly waltzing with Roy's picture because of your descriptive writing. Very good. |
 silver sniper of night 2009-03-05 . chapter 5That was wonderfully written, and so powerful. Amazing work. |
 Emi-Chan18 2009-03-04 . chapter 5Wow this is really good |
 fAteD lOvE 2009-03-04 . chapter 5Liked the ending :) |
 Briyalia 2009-01-27 . chapter 3Wow. Fantastic description of Roy. |
 Briyalia 2009-01-27 . chapter 4Aw that chapter was so sweet, it seems just like what their relationship would be like |