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| Reviews for The New Kira |
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   Day 2 live Day 2 Die 5/20/08 . chapter 2Great job a few grammer errors though hey can I be in it though if it's not to musch trouble my name is Kali |
| herlittlemonster 5/16/08 . chapter 1 Kira'sDarkLight- This is Evan Cullen. Great short story! That is such an awesome secret that Chika has! I wish I had it! Is this a story? If it is, I should read it. If it's not, you should make a story. -Evan Cullen |
| Panther X 5/16/08 . chapter 1 Yay! Sayu and Matsuda got married! XD This sounds really good. Keep it up! |
| otherrealmwriter 5/16/08 . chapter 1 This is okay. I wonder where you will take it. Just put more space in between the lines to make it easier to read. |
| yaoinote 5/16/08 . chapter 1 i like this story,good luck wrighting it |
