That's pretty good. I like it. Please update.

col please finish your story

Hi. Just read the story. It is pretty cool. I would love for Joey Wheeler and Yvette to get back together again. That would be wonderful.

Can't wait to read more,
Alia

Awesomeness. Why don't you let Yvette have some mystical powers from her past life, Demmi. That would be cool.

Jade

I read the chapters and I think there pretty cool. Keep up the good. Can't wait to read more

I think it is a great story. You are doing a great job. Don't stop. Why don't you put Yvette and Joey backing together before, durning, and after the big life-changing adventure. I really can't wait to read more. Please, continue with the story.

A fan,
Alia

go on... plz?

I don't know if the first one got on here so I'm going to post this again. I love this story so far, you should keep writing no matter what. I have read all of your stories so far and have enjoyed all of them immensely. You should not let getting reviews get in the way of your obvious love of writing.

I'm so glad you decided to continue it. I miss the classic Yu-Gi-Oh stories from so many years ago, but I know a lot of people have given up. There aren't many good stories (with OCs) left nowadays :( Update soon! :)

I just read chapters 1 and 2. Sorry I didn't leave a review so just count this as 2 reviews! Loved the chapter! Please keep updating, even if it's just me leaving reviews! Keep up the good work!!

Very interesting...and I'm glad to see that it's up again :) Update soon!