I've got to tell you. This is probably one of the best 3:10 fanfics I've ever read. I mean, I haven't read that many, and I've only recently started reading them at all (I try and hold off reading fanfics until I know exactly what I want from them), but this probably takes the #1 spot :)
I love how you captured the essence of both Charlie and Ben, and Lola is a fantastic character. You made her distinct, but just ambiguous enough that the reader can imagine themselves in her place. I like that.
Don't make me wait too much longer for the rest ;)

Haha! I liked her explaining about Charlie being played by Ben Foster! I'm enjoying this.

I was having so much fun reading this. Thank you. And I wonder will you continue? Please do! I wish I get some more of this Charlie Prince fun. I think maybe in some next chapter it could be Lola´s idea that scene where Charlie is pretening to be a hired cowboy to trick the marshall(of course with the original idea to make him a better human.

That was bloody hilarious! I demand you continue! Okay, I make a polite and respectful wish for you to continue, please?

Best wishes,
Zackery

Rofl "tally ho!"

Nicely done. =) Update soon

OMG! Lola can be seen :)

And the fun begins!

Update soon.

OH SNAP^2!!

“Do you always talk this much nonsense?” Charlie asked, sounding annoyed.

“I think.” I tapped my fingers against his shoulders. “Do you always sound so crabby when you talk?”

Bwahaha...

Hah.
That's some funny stuff!
I'm glad they can see her now though.
Maybe it will make her job a bit easier but then again...maybe not.
I like this though. She's a really good character. A fun and entertaining one that makes a person want to know what's going to happen to her.
Update soon.

Great chapter! "Oh, snap" says it all...this is going to be interesting. ^_^ can't wait for more.

“Well,” I sniffed, “that was just rude.”


Rofl this story makes me laugh! Lola is hilarious, and her and Charlie make an interesting pair. Keep up the good work. Update soon!

Hey, wow.

I amdit I initially cringed when I saw the summary, but was honestly really amazed and amused! It wasn't anything like I was expecting, very well written, and incredibly funny! i hope you continue, you have a good knack for words and humor.

:) love it. charlie prince was my fav in the movie! keep up the great work.

I really like the interaction between Lola and Charlie, maybe it's because I'm sarcastic and it sounds like stuff I would say. ^_^ Another great update!

I love this story!! Can't wait for a new chapter.

Very enjoyable. Unusual and extremely different. I look forward to more.