aww! I am so liking your stories.
And I have only read two so far.

just.. perfect!

Excellent missing/extended scene. I enjoyed reading it.

I loved it! Keep writing! Thanks! :D

For a short story I thought it was amazing, when I watched that scene on the T.V. i was crying. In this story you have really brought out the caracters personality and protraited them perfectly without too much fluff, It made me cry again and thats hard to do when writing. You should be proud of yourself.

This was a well written shorty. I could believe that what you added to that sad scene actually happened. Good job!