Not bad, not bad at all. Both Integra and Alucard seem in character, the story carries itself along nicely without becoming dull, and you describe the events in a believable manner. Good job.

Awesome

Very well done. I like the crispeness of it. It really feels as if this could have been canon.

hehe. Very fitting. And I always said that Mina was really the one in charge. ;)

Wonderful.

It's lovely to find one of those rare fics that does Hellsing's characters justice. This was definitely one of them.

Much obliged to you for the great read. ^^

Such a wonderful story. I absolutely love this take on how they met. ^_^

ah ahahahaha she's probbly having the mantra of

CRAP CRAP CRAP CRAP CRAP

when he said that

yay!! i loved it plz keep it going cuz it was awesome. update asap!

That was good.
until next time,
alfalfa7

wow, your latest chapter is some kind of masterpiece again ^^
i've been really taken by surprise by alucards acting, and i'd love to know how the story continues.
your language fits the storyline very well, so please continue. ^^

Short or not it was still good. It would fit in his personality to test her like that, I like it, the bugs amused me really, besides it was wise to show her that there were different sides to him unseen. All in all, while it was short, a good bit happened in truth, a few stepping stones for farther things happen. Very nice, can't wait for another chapter.

yay! I love ur story! plz dont take too long between posts!
:)

Lovely story, I always adore young Integra fanfics. Though, Vladslav I Dracula never became a king, he was a viviode (prince) of Wallachia. The Pope of the time never allowed him to become King.

Wow, i like this. And you portrayed them so well especially when it comes to Alucard taunting her by trying to tempt her with a beautiful face then the look of a monster in his showing her that monsters can come with the masks of beauty. This is definately going into my favorites. I absolutely love this story, it was so well done.

As always Duchess, a great story. I really don't care that it isn't as detailed as your other stories, because the simplicity that this story is told in is really wonderful. This is the way I believe it might have really happened and you make it very believable. I wish it had been longer, but I understand that sometimes the spark for a story goes out. Even still, I hope you one day return to writing, even if you say you are retiring from it. I wish you luck with your original stories but I will miss these wonderful interpretations of Hellsing. Keep writing, if only for yourself. Thank you.