i like it though it loks like it was left open for a sequel.

that was so sad. very good, but sad.

wow this was really cute and sad. i loved it. and if you think that was as good as i did than you are so much better then me by the most far away star ever. man i wish i could right like you. don't mind me i have jealousy issues. i praise people i love. later dude

Cool, I've never read this scene from Piper's point of view.

wow, that was really well written. i wonder what she was going to say...

It wasn't a typical Piper dying scene with Chris there. I'd say, based on my experience of reading the stories, that most of them are from Chris's point of view. However, yours is from Pipers, and slightly from Chris's, and how she views dying in front of him.

It was extremely sweet, even though the tone was sad and the event was depressing. Very good job. I liked it a lot.

And so did AnimeFreaks13, who read along with me. :P

Wow. You're the queen of depression! That was so sad, but I love it!

Well like I have said so many times before, I am a sap...you made me cry. You are evil...lol It was so good though. I never thought about it from Piper's side but now that I read this it would make for a very good story. A good title would be "Through Mother's Eyes"...wow I just thought of at least two other story ideas that could use that title. I think I should write today...but not a new story, just update the ones I have already...thank you. Later

Aw, that was so sad!
It maybe was short but it was really good!!
you made tears come to my eyes again.. but that's good.. it means i really liked it!! I have read some fics and they don't touch me at all! but all of your fics, I 've read, do!
and I loved that chris waited for piper to finish her sentence but she didn't manage to do that.. poor chris.. that was so sad - made me cry which means I loved it.. It's a bit weird to love fics that make you cry but well.. I do! Well done!

Nice story!! I'm almost to tears!!

Wow.

Yeah, I think that's about all I can articulate right now.

Wow.

"...her blood, which had spilled to the floor in an eager rush to freedom." - I love that, I don't know why - I just do. Am I morbid? Yeah, I probably am.

I love how this is from Piper's point of view. We often seen her death from Chris' point of view, so this is a rather new take on the matter. It's so so sad how Chris waits for her to finish speaking...but she never does.
Angst, my dear, angst, angst, angst...
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Wonderfully, beautifully, almost poetically written. (= You've done a fantastic job! I always love reading your one-shots!

OMG short and POWERFUL! That was chilling and sad and beautiful and ... everything. Wow wow wow- you really screwed with my head... right befor bed aswell lol! Brilliant!

Realy good story ^_^

This is a great story. I nearly cried. Keep up the good work.

You should add "Queen of Tragedy" to your title. 'Cause you're just that good.

That was so well done - of course, you know this. Or, more likely, you deny it until I tell you repeatedly and then you just agree with me to shut me up. :)

Either way, that, as is everything you write, was wonderful. And beautifully tragic.

I do have to say one other thing though...I thought you said you'd already done this scene too many times? Why the new version? Okay, well, old version, but still... lol.

-Princess-