I've got to say: Someone's got talent.

It takes talent to write a fanfic that is actually a true character study. It takes talent to write characters that would annoy the hell out of me in actual life and convince me to like them. And it takes talent to be able to make cussing look like an art form.

I love your work here and I really hope you keep writing. I'm looking forward to reading the sequel (and I will probably drop a review there as well, although I know its been two years since you published these). I also look foward to looking into a more recent work and seeing your writing improve.

Thank you for writing! :D

I love Draco and how he tries to warn Scorpius..it kind of reminds me of how Narcissa tried to warn or show some kind of feeling to Draco in the books...very sad but awesome.

I think this must be one of my favorite chapters from this particular story, the fact that James defends Rose is heart-warming , who knew the hot bastard had it in him? I knew all along :)) :D No , really..i adore this chapter;and the Harry Potter stare-more awesomeness..i just wish Scorpius were a bit more courageous but a strongly written beautiful chapter nonetheless.

Wow. I don't really know where to start. This story was brilliant. Honestly, I haven't read anything like it in... well I don't think I've read anything like it EVER.

Definitely my favorite Next Generation story so far. And I've read a lot of them. I absolutely love how extremely annoying every character was. I swear most of the time I wanted to punch all of them. I still loved them though, maybe with the exception of James now and then. You're an amazing writer and the characterization and plot and everything was FANTASTIC.

Dear Loveadubdub,

I think, the best word to describre this chapter would be smart. It is very smart, how you make Rose and James show their true loyalities. I am a bit disappointed of Scorpius sneaky rat behavior. Hope, you will give him another chance some time soon.

Great job, anyway! It takes so long to read it, I cannot imagine the time necessary to write it down. Thank you for your timme and effort.

Sincerely,

Matilda

Dear Loveadubdub,

I really liked the first chapter! At first, I assumed it to be Scorpius POV, with all those negative emotions. Really great. Thank you for a "Lost" hint. I will surely take a look at it.

Sincerely,

Matilda

PS You must be ashamed of ruining my bachelor thesis.

This was wonderful! I love all the personalities you've given to each of the characters! I just love it! I can't even begin to describe how much I've enjoyed this, but I will let you know that I am happily going to read the sequel!

Wow... Scorpius is a wuss.

Finally-James stops being an ass, without loosing his very likeable James-ness. Thank god!

Ok. I just hope you make things be alright with Harry and Ginny. Everything else, great.

Love it. Wingardium Leviosa, EvanEsCo, Swish and Fick.

Hilarious. Good job!

James should have gotten way worse than that for his comeuppance. He ruined Al's chance at love because Al did his job as a prefect (albeit because of a little grudge in Quidditch, where James wasn't really at fault). James was the only one who crossed the line. Hell, he shagged the girl that Al liked, just to spite him. To hell, if my brother had done that to me, I would have Avada Kedavra'ed that asshole right then and there, no questions asked.

I feel strongly about this because James is exactly like my older brother, Al's exactly like me, and Lily's exactly like my little sister (except you know, we're not magical). It was actually really scary the way they were eerily similar to me and my siblings.

I really, really hate James. He's the cause of the entire problem in the first place, and he just kept making everything worse for everyone (seriously, if you review the story, you'll find that James somehow fucked up all of the major characters' lives at one point or another).

Usually people don't need to LITERALLY get hit in the head with a bludger to realize they are in love . . . ;)

Great job!

Excellently done chapter! You write family drama very well. I especially liked Al's flashback to when he was a child and James hurt him.

The scene between Harry and Ginny was beautiful.

I'm very glad to hear that will not be showing up in your stories! ;)