Amazing, I am so enamoured with the little one shot series that you've developed. keep up the great work, really looking forward to seeing what you come up with next
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max

Much Darker than your other Iron Man fics.

Seeing the movie again i could see all the emotions you wrote pass through Tony's eyes. Great job capturing that. I swear Robert Downey Jr owns that part. God he was brilliant.

Tony's anger is bery... very.. in character. Great work on the Beat-the-crap-out-of-whoever-threatens-Pepper part! loved it.

Oh. My God.

I hate Obi. I hate him hate him hate him.

EVIL, EVIL, MAN! I WANT TO HURT YOU!

Y'know, I questioned how Tony was able to force his body to move while still under the paralyzing effect of the device. He was noticeably crippled while he moved, so he did not wait out the necessary 15 mins. He must have been in unbelievable pain, and your little story explains how he got past it. His rage and his selfless concern for Pepper. Brilliant.

Great interpretation of what Tony was going through during that scene!

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AJ

unbelievable this is great. love it.

reakky wonderful one-shot...i would love to read your thoughts on other scenes of the movie...more!

Very nice. That is just like our Tony. "...beating the ever-loving ** out of Obadiah Stane..." that's great! Love it!

Great story. This is one of my top favourite parts of the movie and you did great work with it.

Wow wow wow. Amazingly done. I loved it.