Any idea when the continuation will be up?
Would be so lovely, you know.

This deserves another chapter. XD

Wow this is cutely hilarious... I loved it!

Zack and Aeris are so evil *laughs*

You've introduced me to FF7 based humour.

ROFLMELAO!

this one just **BEGS** for a sequel!

thanx for sharing,

qwik

[chuckles] This was hilarious. Good job!

"That's it. I'm getting Barret to be my male role-model.", that line is genius! :D

Ahahahahaa.

I remember reading this on lj, but seeing as I don't have one myself I didn't do much to acknowledge how much I enjoyed it. But the opportunity has presented itself here, and I've gotta say, this was hilarious.

Everything Zack said, and all of Cloud's emotions, plus your on-point descriptions of everybody and of the "Cloudette" (just B's? xD) are just incredible. You make me snicker with joy.

Nice snickers, of course. Snickers of goodwill and OHMYGOSHILOVETHIS.

Or... something. (I don't make much sense, mostly.)

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Speak for yourself, I think you're phenomenal ^^

- WAS

That was HILARIOUS!

Just sparring, huh? And then they come back with one of them wearing something backwards or wrong or missing...

Oh, that was wonderful, I truly enjoyed it. Best part was:

"... Hey, you never know, they could have perverted designs on your body!"

Cloud rolled his eyes. "No, I'm pretty sure that's just you."

Aeris cleared her throat meaningfully. "Actually..."

Cloud sent her a pained look. "Okay," he rectified, "you and Aeris."

Seriously. LOL'd IRL.

This is great! I laughed the whole way through it. I'm definately waiting eagerly for this new story.

What's the main story?

LMAO! OMG, that was so great!

oh now this has positively got to continue!!

I wanna know what happens!

good though! keep it up!

XD Funfun!

That's cute, I like it. I'd love to see a short series about that materia and what it's powers develop into. Imagine the chaos...