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Reviews For: Cloudette and the Yellow Orb

Fallen Dragonfly
2008-10-05
ch 1,
abuseYou've introduced me to FF7 based humour.
Qwikshot
2008-07-19
ch 1,
abuseROFLMELAO!

this one just **BEGS** for a sequel!

thanx for sharing,

qwik
sillymail
2008-06-02
ch 1,
abuse[chuckles] This was hilarious. Good job!

"That's it. I'm getting Barret to be my male role-model.", that line is genius! :D
With A Smile
2008-05-20
ch 1,
abuseAhahahahaa.

I remember reading this on lj, but seeing as I don't have one myself I didn't do much to acknowledge how much I enjoyed it. But the opportunity has presented itself here, and I've gotta say, this was hilarious.

Everything Zack said, and all of Cloud's emotions, plus your on-point descriptions of everybody and of the "Cloudette" (just B's? xD) are just incredible. You make me snicker with joy.

Nice snickers, of course. Snickers of goodwill and OHMYGOSHILOVETHIS.

Or... something. (I don't make much sense, mostly.)

-favorites-

Speak for yourself, I think you're phenomenal ^^

- WAS
Kitsune Kit
2008-05-19
ch 1,
abuseThat was HILARIOUS!
EfrainMan
2008-05-19
ch 1,
abuseJust sparring, huh? And then they come back with one of them wearing something backwards or wrong or missing...

Oh, that was wonderful, I truly enjoyed it. Best part was:

"... Hey, you never know, they could have perverted designs on your body!"

Cloud rolled his eyes. "No, I'm pretty sure that's just you."

Aeris cleared her throat meaningfully. "Actually..."

Cloud sent her a pained look. "Okay," he rectified, "you and Aeris."

Seriously. LOL'd IRL.
LadyJadeBlaze
2008-05-18
ch 1,
abuseThis is great! I laughed the whole way through it. I'm definately waiting eagerly for this new story.
Choas Babe
2008-05-17
ch 1,
abuseWhat's the main story?
Pokey the Great
2008-05-17
ch 1,
abuseLMAO! OMG, that was so great!
City of Dis
2008-05-16
ch 1,
abuseoh now this has positively got to continue!!

I wanna know what happens!

good though! keep it up!
Azamiko
2008-05-16
ch 1,
abuseXD Funfun!
snowecat
2008-05-16
ch 1,
abuseThat's cute, I like it. I'd love to see a short series about that materia and what it's powers develop into. Imagine the chaos...
chibi luci
2008-05-16
ch 1, anon.
abuseAhaahahaha! that's horrible! i love it! *cries amidst laughter* oh, i can't wait for the rest of it. ^.^
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