Very emotionally expressed. Even with the false memories Vala still felt the pang of being alone once again, and her feelings towards Daniel and the rest were so raw and wanting. I think all Vala really wanted is to belong, be loved or love someone other than herself. I think she was tired of running and now, her false memories only accelerated what she held inside of regret and pain. Her sense of lost was deep felt and you could only sympathize with her emotional disappointment. :D This was deep.

this is fabulous! Well written and deeply moving. A heartbreaking looking into her thoughts, so real. I particularly loved this: *She came here for the slightly grumpy, sometimes tiresome, but often endearing and always attractive Dr. Daniel Jackson.* I am looking forward to more or your stories, thanks for sharing, B

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This was great the first time I read it Nat...still is...you do Vala's internalizing so well.

Excellent Dominion Tag! It really highlights how much Vala has changed since coming to the SGC, and how much less alone she was. Not to mention how much she has come to care and rely on Daniel and the others. The thoughts and doubts that you had running through her mind during the turmoil of thinking she had lost everything once again was really well done.